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the way of women....the bane of men.....
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Sunshine
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the way of women...the bane of men.... is it then the woman’s way to want sweet softness in her day to want soft words of sheer delight to know that a man could make things right instead she has to “deal” with men who have it there, within their kin to go to war, fight or debate to carry a grudge, to even hate what is it about a woman, just so to touch the heart of men who go about their day, not looking for ease when in a woman’s eyes, could find peace? I care not to go to war but yes, I will stand up for the right to right a wrong albeit done with song and if I be the one who has done one wrong could a man not forgive when my “sorry” comes along? when I know I could not sway another soul to think my way I would hope the road I travel down would see soft smiles, never frowns for each to their own, to have their thought meanwhile, stuck with men who have fought for one thing or another, all their life and to their end, to live with such strife no, it’s not my way but I see that it’s yours that’s why I’m a woman and you’re a man, for sure! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Karilea, soft smiles for this. You are sooo right. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, this is soooooooo true. I know there's a difference, and I truly say 'viva la difference' but does it have to be such an uphill struggle.  Love this one Kari, I really do. Wonderful write from you love, absolutely great.Take care Majestic Mushy M  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, that's one sooooo right and one sooooo true. I wonder if there will be any manly input and if so, will it become 49 percent and 49 percent and we will have an unperfect Passions, just as we have an unperfect nation [for the moment....] Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ So count me in - for sooooo right AND sooooo true - (I live in FLORIDA - I can vote twice !) ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I guess the answer is in the yin and yang of life forces...peace is my heart, but war rages around me...LOL at Marge. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
It must be true that men are from Mars and women are from Venus.....those differences are so profound sometimes....can't get around the fact that the two are so differently made. But the bottom line should be...each one should be able to gain the respect of the other by giving in a little to each other in a loving way......but what would I know? ... I have'nt really moved from Mars yet I just travel here to this poetry board because I enjoy it so much....take care, you are a marvelous poet and I know for a fact that you've been married a long time .... so you really know the scoop...love ya ..ethome |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Adding my vote to the "too true" list.. Sandra |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Karilea, of course you're right. Women love and men do fight. But what are men most fighting for? The women that they all adore. For a man must do what's right for you. To keep you safe, he'll fight for you. There's nothing he won't try for you And, if need be, he'll die for you. There's nothing that a man won't do To find your love - unearth it 'Cause, Karilea, I have no doubt You would be more than worth it! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge, you got that vote tagged down yet?! Hurry it up...as long as it's the right one, vote THREE times... Martie, so right, thanks!... ethome, see that wrinkled lady smiling...'tis me...thanks for reading... Cat..."two" thanks for you...{~,^} 'Deer, do you know how SPECIAL personalized pieces of poetic offerings are for one's soul?...{~,^}...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I have to go with ethome and Balladeer on this one Sunshine. . . Couldn't we both just meet on Mercury somewhere?  ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
*grinning* Excellent ending!!!! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Another vote for absolutely true Well done!!!Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
THis is the part where I should start defending men right... but somehow I think it would just get caus ethe snow ball effect, so I will just take out my hairdryer and melt that snow ball, damn those men that fight just have not been loved... or something like that... but us men are not that bad, well speaking for the Irish ones anyway. enjoyed the poem. < !signature--> "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 11-12-2000).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sunshine~ Sweetie I loved your poem and I loved the replies and I'm gonna stand on the sidelines...sorry boring I know  ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sven, when you find the Mercury ticket salesman, buy two... dreamkeeper, thank you...[P.S., Welcome to Passions!] Hello peppermint...thank you... Brian, I am only opining with my opinion...and I for one think the Irish are a fine sort...{~,^}as you know I always relish your visits... Tracie, this wasn't intended to be a "take-sides" thing...it was one of those days when you have a point you want to make, but hug everyone in the end kind of day, y'know?...but thanks for reading... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sorry, Marge, you can only vote once, but we'll have multiple counts. Otherwise, I vote for all that's been said about this wonderful poem Liz |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
laughing at svens reply..enjoyed sunshine.. and balladeers too.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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