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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Cliffs of Time There upon the jagged cliffs of time Resides two spirits awaiting the climb Blessed with a love gentle and pure As delicate as rose petal with hint of dew Treasured memories of a lifetime before Shadow not the journey about to unfold Two souls knowing their destined worth To be united before leaving this earth Their trail behind now a meadow of violets and green Each spirit of life has their own path it seems Together forever embracing heavenly skies Never to part these spirits soar high Far and beyond the jagged cliffs of time.  Coco Note to readers Have you ever wondered where souls do meet ..At the gates of heaven or jagged cliffs of time.. Today, this thought I share with you in rhyme [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 11-10-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Coco, this is lovely, Such an image of promise and hope. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
CocoBaci, Well done, I liked it very much. Yes there is hope out there. "Blessed with a love gentle and pure As delicate as rose petal with hint of dew Treasured memories of a lifetime before Shadow not the journey about to unfold" Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Kethry, your kind response leaves me with smile thank you dear friend for taking the time to peak at this poem. Daniel, I'm happy to read you enjoyed and yeah there's always hope if one believes in forevermores... eternity Coco |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dani~ I just like this so much - 'Each spirit of life has their own path it seems Together forever embracing heavenly skies Never to part these spirits soar high Far and beyond the jagged cliffs of time.' I believe in foreveraftering ... and no matter where we meet ... it will be heaven of it's own accord. These thoughts are simply delicious. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Coco~ This is it......my favorite of yours........truly love this one......  -SEA |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ah coco, this was truly such a beautiful insight to a very sweet soul. Loved it much. *s* |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i tihnk its a splendiferous oops no its a great idea the jagged cliffs of time . very thoughtful Say it with me! "This poem was awesome! Terrific! Totally exciting!" |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Wonderful poem CoCo Soothing. Thanks Rich |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I had never given thought to the question that you have spoke of...but now I shall This was a beautiful weave of love meant to be...lovely thoughts~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
My dearest Marge, your friendship holds a special place in my heart... Thank you LadySeaPoetFriend, you must know that what you've just said hold's close to my heart Gentle Spirit, it's sooo nice to have you visit this post and I send a smile to youWalt, you're a sweetie BUT YA KNOW DAT ALREADY Spiked, I'm glad you found this soothing I was in one of those 'sweet' moods today Butterfly, as always I'm tickled pink to know what you think and I'm delighted to you also liked it [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 11-10-2000).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is precious |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Because in my heart of hearts ... I believe some beauties should be re-read~ For me, on this day ... this holds a special meaning~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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