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CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

0 posted 2000-11-10 02:58 PM

Me and Mine

A heart held captive in cage of time
A mind remembering a love once kind
A soul roaming in skies of alabaster
A me wanting mine to come back to her.

Coco

[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 11-10-2000).]

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2000-11-10 03:06 PM

Coco, my friend....
I am always in awe of your fantastic style!!
This is exquisite in form and thought, and just so perfect. Wonderful!!

Follow your dream!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-11-11 01:49 AM

Dani~
Oh ... this is so perfect in it's plea.
Here's hoping ...
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

3 posted 2000-11-11 01:56 AM

This says so much and says it so very well

Pepper
"I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place"
Ram Dass

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2000-11-11 02:03 AM

Oh yes...I know this one well. I have nights of memories often...this one read to me like staring in a fire...enjoyed.

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

5 posted 2000-11-11 06:47 AM

Coco..this was like opening your heart and
soul and reading your innermost
thoughts...very well written!! and Thanks
for going hunting...you are bring up some
great pieces! You're a gem you are!!

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

6 posted 2000-11-11 10:24 AM

Coco--
i truly enjoyed this! very beautiful. amazes
me how you always come up with such creative ideas and how your words come "alive" on these pages of blue. beautiful work my friend.

take care.
~amy~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

7 posted 2000-11-11 10:49 AM

Coco, my friend, I've been thinking of trying short pieces like this and after seeing how beautiful they can be will probably do so, and will probably (if I do as don't know if I can put meaning into anything this short) use this as a standard to shoot for.

Lovely, coco.

jwesley

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2000-11-11 10:54 AM

CocoBaci,
With the right words there is no need for length. Very good.

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