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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Fair maiden calls to him in vain. Within her soul, a dark red stain. Her knight indulged in cruelest game. She's left alone to writhe in pain. He conquered her and made his claim, a valiant lover's passion feigned. No thought for gentle heart he maimed. Her crimson tears pour forth as rain. Vilest deceiver, does he deign to yet remember where he's lain? She fears she has herself to blame- His legend came before his fame.... [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 11-10-2000).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
this is terrific Sandra..i love it..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Sandra, Desire and all it clamors...alive in that day, and yet again in your words. Very much enjoyed. Robert Joseph |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sandra.... < !signature-->Even anger can bring inspiration.....this poem is wonderful, and the feel of it is so very powerful! I appreciate your spirit!!  Follow your dream! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 11-10-2000).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sandra, this is really really good, it's full of power and I really like this one. You have such talent for writing honest emotions. Wonderful and very well done. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Cat, be this thy way to rend the memory gone methinks it shall be come soon before thee sing new songs... Poetic justice...be swift! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sandra, I'm always glad when I see your name on the lists because it means the reading will be good. This is no exception. Exceptional piece of writing here and methinks, your heart went into the writing. *HuGS* be well Keth Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Sandra, Well done, enjoyed the flow. Cheers. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Thanks, everyone. Can you tell this is a touch personal?? I appreciate all your comments and support. Sandra |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Sandra, this is excellent! take care! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Sandra, once again your pain is felt with each word I read. I hope your true knight sweeps you off your feet soon. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
I too look for your name; for I know I will always be beguiled by whatever you've written This is certainly no exception!!!Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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