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Poet's pen (some of my favorite lines from my poems) Part 1
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Poet's pen (some of my favorite lines from my poems) Part 1 |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Hello,guys,Here, I'm with my favorite lines from my poems.Just want to try it out .hope you like it.!!!!!!!  Will you love me like before, love me, never let me go, My love, after all we've been said and done, After all we've been through you tell me to leave you, Hold me tight, Don't want this night to end, I want this night to rememeber, hold me, Through the night, here we go, holding hands, you asked me how I feel for this love, through the nights, Don't walk away, It's hurts me when you leave me behind, We're miles apart, Don't you see how far we are? And I don't have arms around me, Show me what love has got to do with, Show me all the love you have, Love can hurt once, Love can hurt twice, when It comes toomorrow, love will bring me sorrow, Hope you like these line I have taken from my poems.Enjoyed it!!!!! Poet's pen |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
very good yuh vandana it was a great idea maybe it should be a challenge? Say it with me! "This poem was awesome! Terrific! Totally exciting!" |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Loved it vandana!!! What a great idea. . . hey Walt, maybe this should a challenge!!! -------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
sven lez do it!!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
THANK YOU, BOTH OF YOU!!!!! I'M READY TOO LET'S DO IT pART 2 IS COMING UP TOO,SMILES |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
What a great idea vandana, and how beautifully it turned out Liz |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Good idea vandana..now all sorts of stuff is flying around in my head haa.  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
What a great idea, vandana! I think I may just have to try this! Wonderfully written!! sp I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ This is just lovely. What a wonderful idea to present to others. Most enjoyable. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Thank you for your kind words!!!!!!!!! |
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