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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Simple Words by Ron K. Fox Across the infinite stretch of miles The winds will drift your fragrance to me And through the lightlessness of night The warmth of your luminosity is all I see Everlasting is your velvet touch of gentle hand That is forever there to comfort me This moment that we partake in I declare will always be Embedded like diamonds in gold Set with care, unfathomed within memory Like eternal currents carried to heaven’s shore Ushered upon the tides I journey your sea For your tender love, I cry out, I sing I will praise and I shall always plea From the heart of such a simple man I say these not so simple words of three Which speak of that which is more complex But simply said, I love thee < !signature--> Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox [This message has been edited by Ron K. Fox (edited 11-11-2000).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ron, is your wife just LOVING this? What a true romantic you are. This sounds like something from long ago, the style, (and the actuality of a romantic man) Beautiful. Sandra |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
"I'm nobody! Who are you? Are you nobody, too? Then there's a pair of us -don't tell! They'd banish us, you know." From: I'm Nobody! Who are You? by Emily Dickinson ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Come, take my hand a friend indeed, you to me. I pray demand the seas to calm beneath your rage of boat. Neither depths nor width shall seperate this special love for thee. Together, we'll search for you the peace within you seek. |
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Allstaria22 Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 83MN USA |
You have captured my dreams in your words. thank you Dana |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I have always felt the love and devotion of my husband. I thought he was the only man on earth who could make a woman feel so loved. Now I know that among Passions there are more men who not only tell their wives they love them but want the world to know. This is a very beautiful piece of work. Your wife is very lucky and I know she knows it. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Set with care, unfathomed within memory Ron, I wanted to use that word the other day and no matter how I looked it up..I couldn't find it...so I used unphantomed instead...sighhhh must be these online dictionaries...I knew it existed!!! Oh btw enjoyed your poem  ~Wynter #%@^perplexed&*+# "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
The winds will drift your fragrance to me And through the lightlessness of night The warmth of your luminosity is all I see Each word a treasure of your devotion...thanks for sharing with us, Ron. Robert Joseph |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Ron ~~~ < !signature-->I have to agree with my friend Sandra.....it is always such a pleasant shock to discover the actuality of a romantic man. I'm afraid that in this day and age, you are few in number, but when we ladies find one of you, we cherish you highly!! (and envy your lucky wife!!)  Follow your dream! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 11-10-2000).] |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Ron, all I can do is SIGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Ron, beautiful write, this is so SIGH.... lovely work, I really like this one. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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