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Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2000-11-09 08:36 PM

"Thoughts on my Mind"

Darlin'...there's just some thoughts been on my mind
I figured that I should say them...that it was time
You know that I love you...know it to be true
And that I'd do anything for you

You know that my love is pure
And that I would never make you cry
By now you should know I'm here to stay
And that I will never say goodbye

Still...seems no matter what I do
No matter how much of my heart I share
You get the feeling
One day you'll wake up...and I won't be there

I've tried to shake these feelings
That are deep inside of you
But I am a true loss here
I haven't got a clue

I know the reasons that you feel this way
The pain you've had to endure has taken it's toll
But baby I love you completely
With heart and soul

Not a moment goes by that I don't think of you
Or that I hope you are thinking of me too
I fear that these insecurities may be the thing that breaks us apart
For sure then I don't know what I'd do with a broken heart

So please tell me what is it that you need
Is there something more that I can do
For now please forever simply know
I sincerely do love you

Amy M. Kennedy

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2000-11-09 08:41 PM

Aimster, I have endured the toss of both sides of this coin.  Have faith in knowing
that LOVE when it's true does endure in the end.  Believe in your love.....he will too.
Hugs Hon.

On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2000-11-09 08:46 PM

Amy it's sad when things are going well and the other party won't accept them as being truth....I hope things work out alright... tender love and care as they say....I really got captured in the story of your writing here and enjoyed it very much.....ethome

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

3 posted 2000-11-09 09:44 PM

'Still...seems no matter what I do
No matter how much of my heart I share
You get the feeling
One day you'll wake up...and I won't be there

I've tried to shake these feelings
That are deep inside of you
But I am a true loss here
I haven't got a clue'

*HUGS*, Aim. You have written this so beautifully. Just remember to keep having faith, my friend, and it will work for the best, just you watch, girlie!!
*MORE HUGS*

sp

I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2000-11-09 10:30 PM

Amy,

Your pen has written beautifully of your heart and the feelings within today. This was so sweet and touching. I hope she hears your plea and feels the same. Great work.

LW

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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