Open Poetry #10 |
Blazing Thoughts |
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Winters glove adds magical charm < !signature-->sprinkling snowdust outside firelight warm watching the flames in the firelight dance a tango of sonatas.. my eyes in a trance Your cerulean eyes in the firelight smile your eyes sparkle as i dream for a while cherry blue sultry flames in the fire my blood swirls..blazing thoughts of desire A bed of yule logs seduce the night inviting sweet thoughts of you and us rendezvous within the firelight teases me with your love.. and thus My love entices the flames of romance on a bed of fire, our bodies dance A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 11-10-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I know what you mean Victoria...it's a wonderful cosy feeling to be inside by the fire while the winter snow is swirling around outside....there are so many mystical images that a warm glowing fire can induce leading the poetic types to dreams of wonderment ..it's enchanting fairytale type of atmosphere....I love the way you've described it here. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Victoria~ you'll set the night on fire with this one! love it -SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
WOW.....seems as though the mood of the forum is set for the day as this one it yet another beautiful rendition to that special moment that only true love bears with it. Lovely and very tender in it's warmth and honesty. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
ethome..thank you so much..so glad you enjoyed ethome..nice to hear from you SEA..Thank you ..and for peeking in today Sea.. Mark..We are all in a firelight mood today i guess..if not hopefully i put you all in one..thank you Mark..glad you enjoyed.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
I think I need to get the fireplaces going!!! This is great Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victoria~ This is certainly BLAZING ! Lovely ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you peppermint and Marge..yes i have to get my firelight going too haa..so glad both of you enjoyed.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Your cerulean eyes love the way your color your words, ~V~ just beautiful Good morning to you ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
your eyes sparkle as i dream for a while cherry blue sultry flames in the fire Victoria, a fiery image, I've not seen before...enticing, without doubt. Robert Joseph |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy the read!!!!!!!!! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Wynter..Good afternoon..nice to hear from you as always.. Robert.. thank you..Well Robert you will have to watch thoses flames more often haa.. Vandana..Nice to hear from you again today..glad you liked. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
very lovely, Victoria "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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