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when the wind whispers |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 when the wind whispers do then genuinely listen in tranquility, carefully whispers wing upon the wind as thee shall send to me littlest, tender sayings come vis-à-vis to tease warily wrought of wit then my ear to please silly modest greetings come murmuring this day catch the smile upon my lips when I wing them back your way Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Today I wondered if anyone believed in magic as I do, and did, and YES, I saw and read this.........love it!!!!!!!! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, this is an absoulte gem. I love the graphics, utterly wonderful. And as always the writing is par excellance, I love this and as I'm alone here in this deathly quiet office I'm whooping with delight. Yes love noisy as always. Take care love Majestic Mushy Marsha Be good!  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I believe if we stop and listen we can hear the secrets of life from the wind. Loved your graphic and words. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I love when the wind whispers, this is a beautiful piece.....*S* Greeneyes "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
do then genuinely listen in tranquility, carefully whispers wing upon the wind as thee shall send to me littlest, tender sayings come vis-à-vis to tease warily wrought of wit then my ear to please ============= Sun this is an enchanting whisper you have penned ... mystical and poetic magic later-vis-à-vis-gator  jm |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Karilea, you have turned your poetic abilities into an art form.....and I applaud your creations! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Fascinating little piece here Sunshine... cleverly done....actually whispers to the reader....very nice work!! I like that "do then genuinely listen...in tranquility, carefully...whispers wing upon the wind...as thee shall send to me." Just great lines loved them so much....ethome |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
gee, if y'all keep responding like this, I'm going to think I can do something write, er, right, now and then... Irish, of COURSE you believe in magic...doesn't everyone?... Marsha, still playing with graphics...gonna do it right someday... inot2b...keep listening... greeneyes, so do I...keep listening... JM, knew you'd like the vis-a-vis part... 'Deer, an art form? really? Thank you!... ethome, I appreciate the "clever"...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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poetic_imperfection Junior Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 45 |
Very nice an original. This is a keeper. Loved the graphics... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
poetic - "perfection"...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Loved this and the graphic Hands clapping now!! Bravo! Deb |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You have read my poems, so do I need to tell you how much I rely on whispers in the wind? I bet not. You have penned a beauty in this piece and one that I will hold very dear as I do so love the dedication of the wind to deliver so many of my messages and each and every time they seem to find their way. Very beautifully penned my friend. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
listening quietly. . . and enjoying the song. . .  ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Its amazing just what you can hear if you listen close enough...glorious write Sunshine Don't close your eyes to the possibilities |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sunshine, this is splendid the gentleness in the expression held me captivated. Thank you for an enjoyable read Coco |
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