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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-11-08 04:35 PM





when the wind whispers

do then genuinely listen
in tranquility, carefully
whispers wing upon the wind
as thee shall send to me

littlest, tender sayings
come vis-à-vis to tease
warily wrought of wit
then my ear to please

silly modest greetings
come murmuring this day
catch the smile upon my lips
when I wing them back your way




Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2000-11-08 04:39 PM


Today I wondered if anyone believed in magic as I do, and did, and YES, I saw and read this.........love it!!!!!!!!

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen



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2 posted 2000-11-08 04:40 PM


Kari, this is an absoulte gem. I love the graphics, utterly wonderful. And as always the writing is par excellance, I love this and as I'm alone here in this deathly quiet office I'm whooping with delight. Yes love noisy as always.
Take care love
                Majestic Mushy Marsha
                 Be good!
                  
                


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

inot2B
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3 posted 2000-11-08 05:19 PM


I believe if we stop and listen we can hear the secrets of life from the wind. Loved your graphic and words.
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4 posted 2000-11-08 05:39 PM


I love when the wind whispers,  this is a beautiful piece.....*S*

Greeneyes

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Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
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Janet Marie
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5 posted 2000-11-08 05:43 PM


do then genuinely listen
in tranquility, carefully
whispers wing upon the wind
as thee shall send to me

littlest, tender sayings
come vis-à-vis to tease
warily wrought of wit
then my ear to please
=============
Sun this is an enchanting whisper you have penned ...
mystical and poetic magic
later-vis-à-vis-gator  
jm


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6 posted 2000-11-08 05:51 PM


Karilea, you have turned your poetic abilities into an art form.....and I applaud your creations!
ethome
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7 posted 2000-11-08 05:52 PM


Fascinating little piece here Sunshine... cleverly done....actually whispers to the reader....very nice work!!

I like that "do then genuinely listen...in tranquility, carefully...whispers wing upon the wind...as thee shall send to me."  

Just great lines loved them so much....ethome

Sunshine
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8 posted 2000-11-08 09:25 PM


gee, if y'all keep responding like this, I'm going to think I can do something write, er, right, now and then...

Irish, of COURSE you believe in magic...doesn't everyone?...

Marsha, still playing with graphics...gonna do it right someday...

inot2b...keep listening...

greeneyes, so do I...keep listening...

JM, knew you'd like the vis-a-vis part...

'Deer, an art form? really? Thank you!...

ethome, I appreciate the "clever"...thank you...


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



poetic_imperfection
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9 posted 2000-11-08 10:00 PM


Very nice an original. This is a keeper. Loved the graphics...
Sunshine
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10 posted 2000-11-09 11:52 AM


poetic - "perfection"...thank you...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



BloomingRose
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11 posted 2000-11-09 01:13 PM


Loved this and the graphic
Hands clapping now!! Bravo!

Deb

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12 posted 2000-11-09 01:20 PM


You have read my poems, so do I need to tell you how much I rely on whispers in the wind?  I bet not.  You have penned a beauty in this piece and one that I will hold very dear as I do so love the dedication of the wind to deliver so many of my messages and each and every time they seem to find their way.  Very beautifully penned my friend.
Sven
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13 posted 2000-11-09 01:30 PM


listening quietly. . . and enjoying the song. . .



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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Paula Finn
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14 posted 2000-11-09 01:33 PM


Its amazing just what you can hear if you listen close enough...glorious write Sunshine

Don't close your eyes to the possibilities


CocoBaci
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15 posted 2000-11-09 01:41 PM


Sunshine, this is splendid the gentleness in the expression held me captivated.

Thank you for an enjoyable read
Coco

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