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ma miller
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0 posted 2000-11-08 09:58 AM


pseudo-paper

white-hot paper
takes the ink best --
ink absorbing best
into fibers on fire
'til there's a blue boil

if only i could write
with such passion --
such burning passion
i would need to attach
my plume to gallon drums

trees would not grow
fast enough for me --
for deliberate me
and you think
paper mills stink now

the deals would just
come rolling in --
rolling greenly in
wads so thick i'd
join the nouveau riche

but, then i remember
only poets read poets --
read scratching poets
on TV-like screens of
pseudo-paper


m.a. miller
11.08.00

my last post


My calling before me, let quill be my offering;
For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive.

M.A.



© Copyright 2000 ma miller - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2000-11-08 10:09 AM


MA~ this is GREAT!! What do you mean your last post?!?   -SEA
Sunnyone
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2 posted 2000-11-08 12:45 PM


No!!!!.......
This can't be  your last post!!!! We won't allow it........you have to do more, as we need to read you. Please, don't go!!


Follow your dream!


SEA
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3 posted 2000-11-08 06:42 PM


So are you just gonna make us miss you? You aren't going to tell us why? -SEA
Dopey Dope
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4 posted 2000-11-08 07:14 PM


This was great.
"only poets read poets"......hmmm i loved that line!

Hope you do comeback and don't leave like you said you would!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


ma miller
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5 posted 2000-11-08 11:48 PM


SEA, et al ...

i found myself getting wrapped up in looking for admiration for admiration's sake and that means persuading people to read my work by the mere fact that i had read theirs and had commented favorably (whether i actually liked it or not, had no bearing ... i just wanted to be read) and that is wrong ...

i loved posting on Passions and left once before ... i missed the admiration ... i missed the instant gratification ... but, i was losing time and my poetry suffered ...

poetry is a gift ... i've written 200 pieces since April of this year ... i don't know the exact number, but i'd bet i've posted more than half of that work here on Passions ... i need to rejuvenate my gift ... hone it ... polish it ... then give it again ... i hope you understand ... i'm not saying i will never post on Passions again (we all seem to return for that jolt of kudos on occasion and i'm no different) ... i'm pursuing print and really need to focus on that ...

like i said above ...

but, then i remember
only poets read poets --
read scratching poets
on TV-like screens of
pseudo-paper


thanks again to all for reading my scratchings ...

My calling before me, let quill be my offering;
For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive.

M.A.



SEA
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6 posted 2000-11-09 09:05 AM


MA~ I really do understand. Thank you so much for taking the time to explain. I hope your time away finds your heart full of love and joy and your creative ink flowing. I also hope to see you in these blue pages again soon.   -SEA
Paula Finn
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7 posted 2000-11-10 12:59 PM


Mark...but its so lonely here without you...you know you have my admiration...always...and I would read your scratchings on anything...leaves, toilet paper...computer screen...you are a poet...never doubt that...I will miss you...would you mind if I emailed you sometime?< !signature-->

Don't close your eyes to the possibilities



[This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 11-10-2000).]

brian madden
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8 posted 2000-11-11 07:10 PM


Iunderstand your reasons for leaving but please know that you will be sadly missed, and I look forward to your return. A great poem to end on, I look forward to your next chapter of poetry.

but, then i remember
only poets read poets --
read scratching poets
on TV-like screens of
pseudo-paper



"an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree
the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women".
Patti Smith

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