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Last Night
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Last Night |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada 
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Last Night After the lights were all out And the bustling had ended And everyone slept I lay there Thinking of you I remembered the past The good times and bad I remembered the thoughts Of a future together, so strong I remembered the smell Of colgne, smoke and tide And I remembered a love Which had gone wrong Last night as I wept I dremot of the future The joy only you can bring To a life incomplete And I remembered the words Of great love and devotion Meant only for me And I wondered what changed What made those words falter And I hoped for a tomorrow Without so much pain And I prayed for a love To match all the sorrow But I know that can't be 'Cause your love was taken from me "In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On" ~Robert Frost |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
If man could figure out what makes love turn sad, he could finally rest. Nice piece my friend...I feel your ache. jwesley |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
heartfelt memories you weave. feeling it all. be well Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
jwesley Thanks for the response... If only the world we lived in had no heartache perhaps it would be a perfect world Ron Thank you for responding, and feeling as I do. |
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