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Meaningless Without You
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Meaningless Without You |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
My Love, I have come to realize That I could have All of the love in the world, But it doesn't mean a thing If I cannot share it with you. I could attain my deepest dream, But it would be worthless If you could not feel That sense of accomplishment with me. Can't you see, Dear Love, That nothing I do in life will matter If you are not with me? I wish you could understand-- Anything that was ever important to me Does not have much priority Since the day you walked into my life. You have become The single most important individual In my life. There is not a day that passes In which I don't think of you. Not a night goes by before I dream of you And your sweet love. Each moment breathes your name to me. No one will replace you in my heart, And nothing anyone can do Will change the fact That I need you forever. I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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azure Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 52 |
Wow, what can I say? I'm practically in tears. This poem is so heartfelt. Hope you're not going through this now, if you are, I wish you well. Take care. Azure "I put it down on paper and then the ghost does not ache so much" - Sandra Cisneros |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Each moment breathes your name to me. No one will replace you in my heart, these feelings, so many times i have felt....your words touched emotions, thank you..... Greeneyes "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
oooops sorry [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-07-2000).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
ooops [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-07-2000).] |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Beautiful message to the one you love. I'm glad you are feeling these wonderful emotions. take care. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
azure: thank you for your kind words! I'm glad you like it!!  Greeneyes: thanks! glad you enjoyed it!!  Ron: and, thank you, too, for your kind reply! sp I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
I am speechless....and emotionally stunned.....I felt every word you wrote......heart felt write....a moving read. Take Care Jenn E |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You have become The single most important individual In my life. There is not a day that passes In which I don't think of you. Not a night goes by before I dream of you And your sweet love. Each moment breathes your name to me. No one will replace you in my heart, And nothing anyone can do Will change the fact That I need you forever. ================ wondefully written and expressed dedication SP... you have poetically defined your heart and intentions... sincere and honesty kissed words excellent penning take care jm |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
...such words do touch our hearts, hope the one this is directed at loves you too. jwesley |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
SP~ Pulling the heart strings this morning......tearing up my eyes........this is beautiful. -SEA |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Kris-- you continue to amaze me dear friend. just when i think you have written youre best, i'm proven wrong  you have a true gift and i'll say it again I envy YOU...you write with a style and grace that makes a person stop and smile. This is a perfect example of what i'm taking about...not just a love poem, but a true piece of art. take care. ~amy~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What a wonderful poem full of devotion and loyalty...well expressed from the heart... very good!! I really enjoyed the power of the love in this one.....ethome |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Jenn E: that is a nice compliment, and I thank you so much for that!! glad you liked it!! JM: thank you for your kind reply! I'm glad you could stop by!! jwesley: thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!! SEA: that is the greatest compliment a poet could receive, ya know. To know it 'tears up the eyes.' Thank you for your kind words! Amy: what can I say except, thank you soooo much, my dear friend? you flatter me with your wonderful comments, girlie! *blushing* Thanks again, my friend!!  ethome: thank you!! I am glad you could stop by and enjoy!! sp I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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