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Her Song
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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 The fire glows, the music plays… her graceful, supple body sways… She dances ‘neath the full November moon… For anyone who gathers near, enchanting words will touch the ear… to couple with her strange and haunting tune… The melody sounds far away, yet lingers as the guitars play… A spell is cast from every aching note… And every note has sprouted wings, to fly into the hearts of Kings… But only one knows why this song she wrote… He will not bend, but will deny the tear that lingers in his eye… He hears her song…within his mind it plays… Though he is still her Gypsy King, he won’t allow his heart to sing, or even question why he went away… The dawn has chased away the night, and with it comes a golden light… The Gypsy Queen has closed her weary eyes… The music plays within her heart, and in her dreams, they’re not apart… They’re dancing…once again…’neath starry skies… So, if you listen carefully, there’s hidden here the melody… a haunting tune that no one else can sing… It casts a spell, and then some light, on this November winter night… Upon the heart of her lost Gypsy King…   Follow your dream! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 11-07-2000).] |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
As I read it I could hear the gypsy music playing and could see the Gypsy Queen swaying in the wind. To make one see and hear through words is wonderful. |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
wow sunny, this is great. I love the theme. I can imagine the guitars playing, the gypsy dancing, rose in her lips...all to music and song meant for only a lover's ears...wow. Ron< !signature--> Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox [This message has been edited by Ron K. Fox (edited 11-07-2000).] |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
it posted twice...so I'll change this to..must be so good it replied twice. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox [This message has been edited by Ron K. Fox (edited 11-07-2000).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ inot2B ~~~ Oh....thank you....I think my greatest desire is to paint images with my words, and you just gave me great encouragement!!!  ~~~ Ron ~~~ I thank you for both your posts!!! Yes...the music is playing, and I knew you would hear it, as you have the heart of a musician!! Follow your dream! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunny1~ "She dances ‘neath the full November moon… For anyone who gathers near, enchanting words will touch the ear… to couple with her strange and haunting tune…" I love this.....the flow is perfect! Beautiful  -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Lil sis, wonderful, utterly beautiful, and what an enchanting tune she dances to. This is really excellant sis, it's magic, truly magic. Oh how I love this one. Really really brilliant. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
They’re dancing…once again…’neath starry skies… ======================= He is not really gone. Well done. Love is. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ SEA ~~~ Thank you, my good friend.....I'm so glad you liked this one.....it came from this ol' gypsy heart!! ~~~ Big Sis ~~~ So good to see you....how are you? I thank you for coming on by to read, and will be emailing you soon!!! ~~~ Interloper ~~~ Yes....he's still with her in her dreams!! Thank you!! Follow your dream! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
My friend, from one gypsy heart to another, we are dancing in the wind, and for myself, I feel no one is watching.. Beautiful poem. Thanks for writing it. Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love it Sunny..and i love the illustions of the visual painting...be nice if everyone could be as free as a gypsy in the wind..nice thought.. Enjoyed..  you are quite the artist hon.~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh Sunny1 ~ What beautiful images you have brushed with your poet's pen...this is soooo wonderful. Bonnie |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sunny, this is most beautiful, the words befit the graphics, and the graphic art the words... simply beautiful... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny - beautiful, just absolutely beautiful. You possess the talent of a master craftsman when you write. BC |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sunny, This is soooo beautiful.....I found my self getting lost within the words.... Greeneyes "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Sunny, this tale is captivating, wistful, compelling. I enjoyed it very much. I think it's lovely how so many folks use visuals with their poems, and yours is very pretty! Rainydays |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Sandra ~~~ But the winds, as the tides, are subject to change, my friend.....so always dance into the wind.....never turn your back on it! Thank you!! ~~~ Victoria ~~~ I thank you from my heart. Art has always been such a joy to me, and this way I can combine words with pictures!! Such fun!! ~~~ Bonnie ~~~ I did hope that the verbal images would show through, and thank you for easing my mind in that respect!! ~~~ Sunshine ~~~ Thank you.....but you should know by now that you are always a source of inspiration to me....you do, don't you? ~~~ Bill ~~~ Ah.....you are the craftsman, I am merely a student with an insatiable curiosity!! But I thank you.....very much!! ~~~ Greeneyes ~~~ It's ok to lose yourself in words....that's the highest compliment you can pay any poet on this site!! I do appreciate it!! ~~~ Rainydays ~~~ Thank you, and I really enjoy using the graphics. It adds a bit of a challenge to put the two together!! Follow your dream! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"to fly into the hearts of Kings…" OH, OH , OH I love this............ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Kathleen ~~~ Oh....I was hoping that you would stop by, and I'm glad to see you here!! You have such a romantic heart, it's always good to get your opinion!! Thank you!! Follow your dream! |
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