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Making Love (Terza Rima Sonnet)
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Making Love (Terza Rima Sonnet) |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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Making Love Sweet, heavenly delight each time we kiss Sets a beating in my heart I can't ignore Our mouths come together in passion's bliss. Such a beating it set my heart to soar Exploring, caressing our hands meet Bodies throbbing all we want is more Teasing, Invading, our tongues softly greet Smoldering eyes, begging for unity Bodies so fevered steam rises from the heat Joining and throbbing bodies moving free Fired kisses melting, all we want is this Then tremors subsiding, you’re all I see Coming together again lips join in bliss An expression of love each time we kiss Things which matter most must never be at the mercy of things which matter least. ~ Johann Wolfgang Von Goethe ~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mr. Yeats would you KINDLY turn the heat down?...whew... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Okay, so we now know that you enjoy turning on the heat and seeing how many of us you can turn to the cold showers. lol. Exceptionally lovely sonnet from you my friend. Keep that crown shining as you do so well. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
now this is what i call a terza rima  beautifully written..bill..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is called a terza rima As Wilfred Yeats turns up the steam-a With a kiss that's-a really bella Think I like this-a passion-a fella All the ladies, they all know him He's too sexy for his poem Lovely passionate verse, my friend Liz [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 11-07-2000).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill--This is quite spicy..this Terza Rima, but beautiful! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Karilea - Mark I struggle with meter and this cascading rhyme scheme - and you two complain about the heat! - sheesh! (seriously - thank you both) btw Mark - I gave my crown to deer - you and he can compete - I just want to be a lover. Victoria- It was really a fun write - not half as bad as the really complex repeating forms - and the inspiration made it easy ~G~ Liz- For a lady who likes-a my rhyming I hope that-a her bell I been chiming For she pleases me a-so Her poetry-a just glow I'ma just be reading all the timeing Martie - you shoulda be tasting my meatballs ~G~ Thank you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
LOL at Lizzie  Will-babes....have you been in my raspberry tea???  seriously tho..this is execellent .. its obvious the work that went in here and you are the master... superb talent on diplay here....... your cascading rhyme is SOOOOO divine your cadence and meter is right on time Your sonnets are a poetic gift sublime and your passion is making me lose me mind later-love it when your lusty gator jm |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
JM- I love when you later-gater I love when you love my meter so lusty I'll be but not writing to free that my words will get put in the grater Later sweet poet gater |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Wilfred, it is a difficult form and you make it look easy! Very nicely done, sir.... |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
deer - it wasn't THAT difficult - I just had to tease my buds - as I like to crown you and Mark- But sincere thanks |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
ohhhh dear lord!! and you know what that response means...*w* always my friend Greeneyes "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Mr Yeats...this kiss was pure bliss Don't close your eyes to the possibilities |
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