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Silly Thoughts |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin 
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While I lie in bed at night absorbing thoughts and darkness I wonder why I hurt and need conforming thoughts to hide this Why does it hurt to lie alone what fuels the need of needing we're born alone and die but one but yet of one we're pleading What feels so good 'bout knowing that someone else is here with me in darkness no-one's showing open eyes, yet still cant see This seems foolishly silly that just knowing makes a difference it's quite ironic really yet oh so real in truths sense Yet time again I lie here wondering why I wish there was someone cuddled right there so I could simply know she was. Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i likes thinkin about the seriopus and relating it to just how silly it tiz yuh nice job cuddlez rule |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Thanks wayout...  Sorry 'bout the "mix-up"  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Everyone needs connection, touch...it's what makes us alive...love. Great poem! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
never silly, I have the same thoughts only about a "he", not a "she".  wanting some ~Warmth ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I love your ponderings ThunderKyss ... I enjoyed this thought-provoking piece, nicely done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Excellent thought and writing...those "silly" thoughts are the ones that often matter the most...the simple pleasures in life become the most valued...may you find all that your heart desires...all the silly things that you deserve. Terrific writing~ |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Thank you all so very much, just one of those silly little feelings I guess that sort of grow on you Glad you enjoyed.Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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azure Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 52 |
Why IS it so comforting just to know someone's there? I guess, at some level, we're all afraid of being alone. I really like how you've shown that. What a beautiful poem sweetie, I loved it. Azure "I put it down on paper and then the ghost does not ache so much" - Sandra Cisneros |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Azure ~ Thank you Glad to see you liked it, talk to you soon sweetie |
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