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SEA
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0 posted 2000-11-06 09:47 PM



Softly you whispered
and sent my blood humming
brushed your lips over my temple
felt my pulse drumming

Barely there kisses
randomly placed with care
made me want and need
so much more than I dare

So slow you move
with purpose ~ obscene
I feel love ~ I feel lust
and all things wicked between

hot………..so hot you make me
I want to let go
but not yet………….you won't let me
there is more I am to know

With clever hands
……….……you explore……………
making me cry out
begging for more

Kisses come faster
from your delicious lips
and strangle my whimper
as you take hold of my hips

Controlling ~ Possessing
guiding me along
I am helpless
but to sing your song

Moaning and sighing
I know I'll never be the same
……………softly and sweetly………….
I whisper your name


-SEA-

5:44pm
11-06-00

© Copyright 2000 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
insect
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1 posted 2000-11-06 09:53 PM


Very inviting?
Beautiful poem sweet poet!

Martie
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2 posted 2000-11-06 09:54 PM


Whooo...Steamy...and beautifully done!
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3 posted 2000-11-06 10:09 PM


tell the truth originally your font color choice was midnight blue but after you submitted it just showed up red hmmmmm as in hot hot hot yuh great poem
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4 posted 2000-11-06 10:33 PM


Insect~ thank you.I'm happy you liked this  

Martie~ thanks!!  

Walt~ yep, I picked midnight blue......YUH!   -SEA

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5 posted 2000-11-06 11:28 PM


Whew, what PASSION! Great poem!

Azure
"I put it down on paper and then the ghost does not ache so much" - Sandra Cisneros

Wilfred Yeats
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6 posted 2000-11-06 11:38 PM


I've been accused of it - it's only fair it use the word here - this is


At least I need a cold shower - wonderfully sensuous SEA - I loved it

Butterflies_dont_cry
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7 posted 2000-11-06 11:54 PM


Your talent is amazing....to be able to say
anything with all this going on   Great
work Sea~

Daniel J D
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8 posted 2000-11-07 12:05 PM


SEA,
I will have to get a check up. My heart has popped out for a while. If you see it near you, well.....

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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9 posted 2000-11-07 04:36 AM


Whew!! get it on!! This is so sensual and it held me like a magnet. I did'nt know what was going to come next.......very thought provoking and wonderful work SEA!!
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10 posted 2000-11-07 05:21 AM


SEA, now who's sensual, this is HOT, and you know how I love HEAT. Brilliant, this is amazing. Love this one I really do, now I need a lie down, with my man!!
Take care
             Mushy Marsha
                               
                      

Highlander
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11 posted 2000-11-07 06:02 AM


It is good to read such passion written so freely. I will read this often!
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12 posted 2000-11-07 07:35 AM


Barely there kisses


I absolutely love these words SEA...you have inspired me..and yesterday I couldn't even think...look for one in a bit..and thank you very very much.

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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13 posted 2000-11-07 08:26 AM


Sea,
When you can write, write it!! WWOOHHOOO!!!

now excuse me while I go take a hormone pill      Great job.

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14 posted 2000-11-07 09:39 AM


Azure~ thank you very much!  

WY~ that made me feel very good, thank you  

BDC~ normally I can't even remember my name!  

DJD~ I'll handle it with great care and send it home to you sweet one  

Ethome~   so glad you liked this

Mushy~ Thank you, I'm happy you stoped in to read  

Highlander~ thank you!  

Wynter~ I'll be looking out for it!  

Compassion~ glad you liked!  

-SEA

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15 posted 2000-11-07 09:45 AM


WHEW!!!!!!  Inspiring, among other things ;-)

Love is.

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16 posted 2000-11-07 11:09 AM


Interloper~   glad you liked this, thank you for reading...... -SEA
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17 posted 2000-11-07 11:10 AM


I dare say, Lady, that if I were the one igniting this fire, a whisper would be most welcome. I enjoyed the read.
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18 posted 2000-11-07 11:41 AM


WHEW!!!!!!  Inspiring, among other things ;-)

Love is.

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19 posted 2000-11-07 12:33 PM


Sea you just swept me within your undertow..this is an amazing, sensual poem. wow. Ron

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox



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20 posted 2000-11-07 01:52 PM


'scuse me while I call my insurance to see if they cover heart failure due to poetic response stemming from over exposure to heat will ya?  My word, my sweet friend ... are you intentionally trying to cause me to go ape over these thoughts and visions you conjure up?  Wouldn't it just be more humane to set me out to pasture or something?  WHEW....are ya sure it is TOOOOOOOOOO far and if you say so, are you so sure that I wouldn't find it just a little too easy to make that trip.  OMG............need air, need cold water.........gasp....ahhhhh, I need mouth to mouth....QUICK!!!!!!
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21 posted 2000-11-07 01:54 PM


Is it hot in here? Or is it just me? Very emotional poem. I really enjoyed it. Great job.
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22 posted 2000-11-07 05:34 PM


Highlander~ thank you very much  

Interloper~  

RonK~ I like sensual   thank you

Mark~ I'm not too far away.....just look in your heart my sweet friend, I'm right there. I'm so glad you liked this....... You are simply the sweetest!  

Effigy~ Very nice to see you here, thank you very much  

-SEA

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23 posted 2000-11-07 05:39 PM



SEA my friend, the color purple of passion suits your form quite well...

I like this one alot and as I whisper to you " pssst may I thread it too "

2late I already did it
Coco


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24 posted 2000-11-07 05:42 PM


Well yet another poem from sensual SEA!

Cheers
Jon

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25 posted 2000-11-07 05:46 PM


*WOW*......this is.....*hot*.......
and I love it....glad that I could come in for a few minutes....and found this one....oohhhh.....I hate it that I aint able to read a lot more, I miss all the good stuff inhere...wish that I have more time, to read and reply.

((hugs))

Charisma

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