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I whisper your name.........
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I whisper your name......... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Softly you whispered and sent my blood humming brushed your lips over my temple felt my pulse drumming Barely there kisses randomly placed with care made me want and need so much more than I dare So slow you move with purpose ~ obscene I feel love ~ I feel lust and all things wicked between hot………..so hot you make me I want to let go but not yet………….you won't let me there is more I am to know With clever hands ……….……you explore…………… making me cry out begging for more Kisses come faster from your delicious lips and strangle my whimper as you take hold of my hips Controlling ~ Possessing guiding me along I am helpless but to sing your song Moaning and sighing I know I'll never be the same ……………softly and sweetly…………. I whisper your name -SEA- 5:44pm 11-06-00 |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Very inviting?  Beautiful poem sweet poet!  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Whooo...Steamy...and beautifully done! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
tell the truth originally your font color choice was midnight blue but after you submitted it just showed up red hmmmmm as in hot hot hot yuh great poem |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Insect~ thank you.I'm happy you liked this  Martie~ thanks!! Walt~ yep, I picked midnight blue......YUH!  -SEA |
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azure Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 52 |
Whew, what PASSION! Great poem! Azure "I put it down on paper and then the ghost does not ache so much" - Sandra Cisneros |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I've been accused of it - it's only fair it use the word here - this is  At least I need a cold shower - wonderfully sensuous SEA - I loved it |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Your talent is amazing....to be able to say anything with all this going on Great work Sea~ |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
SEA, I will have to get a check up. My heart has popped out for a while. If you see it near you, well..... Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Whew!! get it on!! This is so sensual and it held me like a magnet. I did'nt know what was going to come next.......very thought provoking and wonderful work SEA!! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
SEA, now who's sensual, this is HOT, and you know how I love HEAT. Brilliant, this is amazing. Love this one I really do, now I need a lie down, with my man!! Take care Mushy Marsha   |
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Highlander Member
since 2000-11-06
Posts 50Dundee, Scotland |
It is good to read such passion written so freely. I will read this often! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Barely there kisses I absolutely love these words SEA...you have inspired me..and yesterday I couldn't even think...look for one in a bit..and thank you very very much. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
Sea, When you can write, write it!! WWOOHHOOO!!! now excuse me while I go take a hormone pill Great job. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Azure~ thank you very much! WY~ that made me feel very good, thank you BDC~ normally I can't even remember my name! DJD~ I'll handle it with great care and send it home to you sweet one Ethome~  so glad you liked thisMushy~ Thank you, I'm happy you stoped in to read Highlander~ thank you! Wynter~ I'll be looking out for it! Compassion~ glad you liked! -SEA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
WHEW!!!!!! Inspiring, among other things ;-) Love is. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Interloper~ glad you liked this, thank you for reading...... -SEA |
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Highlander Member
since 2000-11-06
Posts 50Dundee, Scotland |
I dare say, Lady, that if I were the one igniting this fire, a whisper would be most welcome. I enjoyed the read. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
WHEW!!!!!! Inspiring, among other things ;-) Love is. |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Sea you just swept me within your undertow..this is an amazing, sensual poem. wow. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
'scuse me while I call my insurance to see if they cover heart failure due to poetic response stemming from over exposure to heat will ya? My word, my sweet friend ... are you intentionally trying to cause me to go ape over these thoughts and visions you conjure up? Wouldn't it just be more humane to set me out to pasture or something? WHEW....are ya sure it is TOOOOOOOOOO far and if you say so, are you so sure that I wouldn't find it just a little too easy to make that trip. OMG............need air, need cold water.........gasp....ahhhhh, I need mouth to mouth....QUICK!!!!!!  |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
Is it hot in here? Or is it just me? Very emotional poem. I really enjoyed it. Great job. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Highlander~ thank you very much Interloper~ RonK~ I like sensual thank youMark~ I'm not too far away.....just look in your heart my sweet friend, I'm right there. I'm so glad you liked this....... You are simply the sweetest! Effigy~ Very nice to see you here, thank you very much -SEA |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SEA my friend, the color purple of passion suits your form quite well... I like this one alot and as I whisper to you " pssst may I thread it too " 2late I already did it Coco |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
Well yet another  poem from sensual SEA!Cheers Jon |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*WOW*......this is.....*hot*....... and I love it....glad that I could come in for a few minutes....and found this one....oohhhh.....I hate it that I aint able to read a lot more, I miss all the good stuff inhere...wish that I have more time, to read and reply. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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