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| Open Poetry #10 |
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if only you'll let me stay... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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i'll compose for you a lullaby to sing with the crickets if only you'll let me stay and watch you sleep i'll weave you a story of paradise and sea if only you'll let me stay and watch you dream i'll silence the atmosphere with sweet dulcet whispers if only you'll let me stay and hear you breathe i'll linger all night in the warmth of your presence if only you'll pull me near and let me stay... -dgvarner theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
ok then, but don't hog that covers.  This is very nice and sweetly tempting. Parker |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~This is so lovely...!!~ ~Cherie~ |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Found you at last on page three!!! Well I popped out and wandered in here ....this is a lovely poem DGV......it's so gentle and as usual well written.........sure is lonely back at the watering hole!........awww well I'm off now ......me drinks waiting. It's really lovely at the pub You get nice drinks and lovely grub You can even share a tub  or two..So if your feeling rather weak Don't despair just back you sneak They'll always be a welcome home....for you Sorry .........It's really lonely now!!! Jon |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
dg, I've sung with the crickets before. . .they're pretty good, but they could really use a drummer! Wonderful my friend. . . just wonderful. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
dg...this is really, really sweet. Just has such a good flow to it. 4 stars! **** |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
PARKER..aw come on baby..cover hogging?? me?? i'll just cuddle up close to you and who'll need covers... !!  BETH..thank you! glad you enjoyed reading me aw JON... thanks for finding me...and for the poem too!! your too kind..save me a drink..coke for me tho--i'm a laugh on the floor if i drink! haha!  SVEN..was that you harmonizing with the crickets and me??  cool! a drum?? hard to sleep with drumming goin on, no? glad you liked SERAPHIN..thanks for the 4 stars! (thats good right? LOL) thanks for reading! hugs, dg theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dee, did you just try to slip one past me. This is perfect, absolutly perfect. If there were enough superlatives to go round they still wouldn't be enough. Still hey you know you deserve them for this beauty, it's fantastic. The trouble for me is since your work is always so good, and since it's getting better, I'm going to run out of praise unless I come up with some new words just for you. I'll have to think up some. Marsha |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
dgvarner, Aww.. this poem is so sweet I liked it alot! I'm glad I stopped in.~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Liked It!!!!!!!!! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
rosepetals & vandana..thanks so much for reading!!..glad you enjoyed  hugs, dg theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG~ Neat little write. I enjoyed it bunches. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dee love I like this so much I'm boosting it back to the top, and it'll keep it away from mine. There, that's scuppered that plot, lets face it love it's not a good idea to showcase gilt next to solid gold is it. (and cheap gilt at that) Speak to you soon Bubbles |
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Tears_of_Grace Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 50 |
This was soothing to read, I enjoyed it very much. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
ah yes.... we don't need no stinking covers  |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
MARSHA..i didnt thank you for your first reply...but i'll thank you for them both right now!!! you must have sneaked in there the first time.. always good to hear from you--glad you liked TEARS OF GRACE..thanks for your kind reply..so glad you enjoyed! PARKER..oh, change of heart on the stinking covers aye... hee hee!theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Dee - what lovely sentiments. Please don't tell me they are for your kitty! Yanno, that would be really cruel. lol - Very nice composition and consistency in your presentation. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- hmmm...thought i had already responded to this one...guess i was wrong. anyway,i really like this alot. very sweet and romantic. love ya, -tricks "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
MARGE..(sorry i missed you last time!) thanks for reading! glad you liked LNGJHN..my kitty?? no....some flirtatious canadian was the inspiration!  glad you enjoyed the read TRICKS..spank you very much glad you came to netpoets..that way i always have at least one fan! < !signature-->theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 10-05-2000).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
flirtatious Canadian eh! Watch out for them, I hear they are the best lovers in the world.... don't ya know. Parker |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
DGV~ This is a lovely poem, my dear. Very heartfelt and touching. I love your sentiments (but then, I am a hopeless romantic anyway!!!). Thanks for sharing. I loved it! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
PARKER..you flirt up my skirt.... TERRYW..very much appreciate your reply nothin like hopeless romantics thanks for reading!!hugs, dg theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Ha..ha...it's usually me begging the woman to stay...by all means you may stay...James |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
JAMES(jmlee)..hey..glad you stopped in to read me! massages aye...(chkd out your info folder...) you give as well as take??  cause baby its a "stay all niter"! hugs, dg< !signature--> theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 10-05-2000).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Great poem, just as all your others... I have read alot poems from your hand, haven't reply to all, cause there is soooo much to read and learn and.......well as you see busy with spending my time here. keep up the great work Charisma |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Well, I could hide under there.... but could you keep a straight face. Parker |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
CHARISMA..thanks for reading me even if you dont reply to them all! glad youve enjoyed my poetry i know its hard to keep up with everyone in here..theres just not enough time in the day..or nite!! lolPARKER..a straight face?? no..i'm sure i'd giggle every now and then..and sometimes wiggle..! < !signature-->theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 10-06-2000).] |
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jinxed Member
since 2000-09-27
Posts 86 |
great poem....enjoyed it much, and the responses too |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
jinxed..thanks a bunch! hey..those replies are pretty entertaining aye..?? hugs, dg "after a while, you learn the subtle difference between holding a hand and chaining a soul..." -V A Shoffstall |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'i'll linger all night in the warmth of your presence if only you'll pull me near and let me stay...' So warm, romantic, and longing all rolled into one! I absolutely love this one! Excellent write!! sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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