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My Spirit Breathes
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My Spirit Breathes |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
My Spirit Breathes… It was you who found me…lost… tumbling to the depths of loneliness… struggling to breathe Cautiously you extended your hand and nurtured me in the embrace of your heart In the tenderness of your smile you harboured me from the ghosts still haunting the ruins of my past in the sincerity of your eyes my heart learned to once again trust and I did grasp the love you so genuinely offered because you have shared with me the very center of who you are the spirit which lives inside of me now breathes in love Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
AWC~ I know how this feels......it's how my husband made me feel  It's wonderful isn't it?! This is a fantastic write! -SEA |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is beautiful!!  |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
This is absolutely stunning! A perfect description, I love it! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
thank you everybody, I am truly appreciative of the kind replies. Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Well written, keep it going, you are in the right place at Passions. "Cautiously you extended your hand and nurtured me in the embrace of your heart Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
quote: This is perfect. . . absolutely perfect. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
well done...very well done... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
So tenderly woven...the delicate verse touched my heart...this is just the way the strongest bonds begin...starting at the soul and working their way out..Excellent writing~ |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Daniel, Sven, Sunshine, and Butterflies, thank you all for the wonderful replies, I am feeling very at home here and am so appreciative of everyone's thoughtfulness. Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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