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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2000-11-06 06:31 PM



I want to be more than a lover and friend.
I want to share
your smiles,
your thoughts,
your troubles,
you.

I want to be more, if you can comprehend.
I want to share
my time,
my feelings,
my life,
me.

If there is room in your heart for my sunshine,
I want to share
good cheer,
good times,
good company,
worth.

If there is room in your life for heady wine,
I want to share
sweet romance,
sweet love,
sweet union,
eternity.


Love is.

© Copyright 2000 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you
1 posted 2000-11-06 06:39 PM


Sounds like you are in LLLOOOVVVVEEEE and got it real bad! This is wonderful   -SEA
Ron K. Fox
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2 posted 2000-11-06 06:51 PM


A very unselfish act you have given into. But giving and receiving love is, Your heart and soul is a priceless gift. hope you recieve it back tenfold.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox


Highlander
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3 posted 2000-11-06 06:54 PM


A tale of love in verse. Very nice.
Kitty**
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4 posted 2000-11-06 06:57 PM


I WANT TO SHARE TOO!!! ;-)
A great write...
I do believe you are in LOVE...

Kitty

If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2000-11-07 09:40 AM


Sea & Kitty - To be honest, I am probably more in love with love.

Ron - I have received more than my fair share.  Probably because I try to give it freely, without reservation.  thanx.

Highlander - You got it.  Very perceptive ;-)

Love is.

Victoria
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6 posted 2000-11-07 09:54 AM


Enjoyed all of your poems very much..Welcome to Passions..look forward to reading more..

                  ~Victoria~

              


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2000-11-07 10:44 AM


In love with love...aren't all of us romantics?  this was very sweet and so sincere...

~Wynter's touched

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Interloper
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Deep in the heart
8 posted 2000-11-07 12:26 PM


Victoria - Thanx for the kind words.  Can't believe you read them all.  You must be a glutton for punishment   )

nakdthoughts - Your name says it all.  Yes, we romantics must write our naked thoughts, else they are lies.< !signature-->

Love is.


[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-07-2000).]

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