Open Poetry #10 |
I want to share |
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I want to be more than a lover and friend. I want to share your smiles, your thoughts, your troubles, you. I want to be more, if you can comprehend. I want to share my time, my feelings, my life, me. If there is room in your heart for my sunshine, I want to share good cheer, good times, good company, worth. If there is room in your life for heady wine, I want to share sweet romance, sweet love, sweet union, eternity. Love is. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sounds like you are in LLLOOOVVVVEEEE and got it real bad! This is wonderful -SEA |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
A very unselfish act you have given into. But giving and receiving love is, Your heart and soul is a priceless gift. hope you recieve it back tenfold. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Highlander Member
since 2000-11-06
Posts 50Dundee, Scotland |
A tale of love in verse. Very nice. |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
I WANT TO SHARE TOO!!! ;-) A great write... I do believe you are in LOVE... Kitty If you can't make it so, you need to let it go! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sea & Kitty - To be honest, I am probably more in love with love. Ron - I have received more than my fair share. Probably because I try to give it freely, without reservation. thanx. Highlander - You got it. Very perceptive ;-) Love is. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Enjoyed all of your poems very much..Welcome to Passions..look forward to reading more.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
In love with love...aren't all of us romantics? this was very sweet and so sincere... ~Wynter's touched "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Victoria - Thanx for the kind words. Can't believe you read them all. You must be a glutton for punishment ) nakdthoughts - Your name says it all. Yes, we romantics must write our naked thoughts, else they are lies.< !signature--> Love is. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-07-2000).] |
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