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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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Pathetic at best is all I can feel with all Ive confessed I doubt that I'll heal I told you I loved you I still feel the same you said you never knew such lies are for shame I gave you my heart and you took it in stride felt wrong from the start when you let me inside and when it was done I was left so confused the dream had been fun but my mind was abused what did you expect? you said as I stared how could you neglect the way that I cared and why is it me who cant sleep at night crying constantly it dosent seem right I wish that I knew why I cant pass the day without thinking of you and what I would say to hold you once more and know that your mine even when I'm sure you'd just hurt me in time |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Kevin, so good to read your work again. i see you haven't skipped a beat...still turning out some awesome work. this one got me big time. a lot of feeling in depth in this poem. i am sorry that you are hurting. i hope you find comfort and start to heal. god bless. take care. amy  "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
kevin..this is so sweet, and sounds like you have such a gentle heart...i'm sorry youre hurting..love does hurt sometimes doesnt it...  heres hoping you heal real soon hugs, dg theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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Waverly917 Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90Hugo, MN |
I wish that I knew why I cant pass the day without thinking of you and what I would say to hold you once more and know that your mine even when I'm sure you'd just hurt me in time That is just the way love is sometimes. It doesn't matter if they can be hurtful sometimes, that doesn't stop the feelings. Hope you are able to reclain your heart soon. Abra "So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains And we never even know we have the key." -Already Gone, The Eagles |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Kevin, I almost missed this one my friend. I am so glad I found it. Once agian, as always, your heart is on your sleeve. I wish you much happiness in the future. You are a very special person Kevin, perhaps you deserve better......... Hugs, Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Hi Kevin this is great work here, so easily could hear your heart beat to each line, that's what really makes a poem. |
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