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Kitty**
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

0 posted 2000-11-05 09:03 PM

I changed the sheets on my bed today,
polished the furniture to a shine.
I want everything, just right tonight,
when I let you enter my mind.
I've taken my bath, and brushed my hair,
and sprayed on a tad of cologne.
Slipping nude, between the crisp clean sheets,
you're here with me, though I am alone.
I pull the pillow close to me,
and snuggle down in my bed.
Then let your image consume me,
and let our memories flood my head.
In the past you've taken me, to heights unknown,
and you quenched my souls fire.
Tonight, though I can recall it all,
you're not here to satisfy my desire.
I drift off to sleep, with your name on my lips,
I'm still clutching my pillow tight.
If only you had been here with me.
It would have been, a perfect night.

If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-11-05 09:08 PM

Kitty~
This is just a wonderful longing piece.
You painted the picture so clearly ...
well said and sadly so.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mick Hawkes
Member

since 2000-10-26

Posts 90
Tees-side , England

2 posted 2000-11-05 09:11 PM

You just can't beat poetry from the heart
great poem ... thanks

Mick

A smile a day helps you work , rest & play.

Kitty**
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

3 posted 2000-11-05 09:20 PM

Marge...Thanks for your nice comment..
Longing ? Yeah! ;-)

Mick: Thank you too for reading! ;-)
Sometimes thoes damn memories are rough! LOL

Kitty

Elizabeth

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Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

4 posted 2000-11-06 05:39 PM

I can really relate to this--seems that I say that a lot about your poems, Kitty. I know how it is to have an almost perfect night. Great work once again!

Elizabeth

You cling to your ways and leave mine to me.
Suum cuique.
~Elizabeth

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2000-11-06 05:47 PM

Yeah, but it's cold and dreary without the memories, my friend, thank God for them.

Now I have two more hours to wait for me mate to come in after reading this...by then the kids will be home and want to eat, etc. etc., and chances are they'll bring home friends...

Gad! What have you done to me??

Lovely piece...

jwesley

Kitty**
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

6 posted 2000-11-06 06:50 PM

Elizabeth: Here's hoping for a PERFECT night
for you! (and me too) ;-)

jwesley: Get the responsibilities out of the way and go to bed with sweet memories.
Sweet dreams...;-)

Highlander
Member

since 2000-11-06

Posts 50
Dundee, Scotland

7 posted 2000-11-06 06:56 PM

Slipping nude, between the crisp clean sheets,

you have my attention!

Kitty**
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

8 posted 2000-11-06 07:01 PM

Highlander....LOL...I have FINALLY gotten
some ATTENTION!!! YIP YEEEEEEEEEE !!!!!

BTW...Did you notice the polished furniture?
Nah...I doubt it! ;-)

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