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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2000-11-05 05:23 PM

Close your eyes,
You see a rainbow
through clouds,
In your eyes,

Close your eyes,
You only see a dream about us,
You see a smile
upon the sun,
The sun so bright
Into your eyes,

You close your eyes,
Wonder about,
so many reasons,
To find and search within
your heart and soul,

You close your eyes,
Dreamnt about life and time
space between us and a dream,

Close your eyes ,
See a cloud through your eyes,
you even see a world
In your eyes,

Close your eyes,
What do you see?
Do you see things
That are surrounded by the clouds,

close your eyes,
you smile
whether time takes you by
and take everything you have
Make a wonder about
what you see or
what you don't want to see
In your eyes,

When you close your eyes,
you close your eyes,
and smile in your dreams,

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-11-05 05:45 PM

This is so lovely, Vandana!

Denise

Alle'cram
Senior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

2 posted 2000-11-05 05:49 PM

Hi Vandana,
I clicked onto your name after reading a loving tribute in your honor from Sven, so glad I did. You measure up to his billing. Wonderful poem and my treat to read. Marcy

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-11-05 05:51 PM

VanDana~

'you close your eyes,
and smile in your dreams,'

The very essence of dreams ... those smiles !

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2000-11-05 07:08 PM

vandana,

Lovely thoughts and dreams. May they all come true for you.

LW

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Christopher

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

5 posted 2000-11-05 07:20 PM

smile in your dreams - awesome - I love the thought.

Chris

[This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 11-05-2000).]

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2000-11-05 09:12 PM

now, if I could just smile in my reality. . .

wonderful my friend. . . as always. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Mick Hawkes
Member

since 2000-10-26

Posts 90
Tees-side , England

7 posted 2000-11-05 09:48 PM

when you close your eyes the world is yours to command......
its what makes us different from the rest of the worlds Creatures ......

Mick

A smile a day helps you work , rest & play.

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