Open Poetry #10 |
Tides of the Night |
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
The choir within your voice haunts me < !signature-->quiet whispers in tides of the night flowing gently like waves of the sea protecting like a beacon light your touch soft as an Asian silk tree your eyes and your kiss invite intoxicating like potpourri it was truly love at first sight Your lips are soft as warm velvet soothes like the strings of violins your kisses sweet as crepe Suzette upon slopes of alabaster skin your voice whispers, a string quartet upon silken leaves and violins A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 11-05-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Intoxicatingly beautiful, Victoria! Wow! Very pretty! Denise |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Denise..so glad you enjoyed... nice to hear from you ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Victoria this is a simply lovely description of the intricate delicacies of Love...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you James..alway nice hearing from you..happy you enjoyed.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Victoria, girlfriend, yu the gal!! let us know when your book goes to press. Marcy |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
I can hear the music...again you exceed the last...Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Victoria, Beautiful work. Ain't love grand? LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Beautiful and silky as always ~V~ ~Wynter Blissfully saying goodnight "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Marcy..i sure will thank you for asking..my poetry book is out but my novel im still working on..thanks for stopping by and inquiring.. Ron..thank you for inspiring me to keep writing..appreciate you kind comments.. Lone Wolf..It certainly is thank you..nice to hear from you.. Nakthoughts..thank you Nt..good night and sweet dreams ha..hope you get over the flu real soon< !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 11-05-2000).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Victoria: This is simply capitvating. Someone is in love. Gosh, I wish the entire world were! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I bet that someone is you..thank you kathleen glad you enjoyed hon.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Lovely imagery in this beautiful flowing piece...well penned Victoria Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you tracie..happy you stopped by today... ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
That's SOME voice - wooo eeee wow! - Great poem Victoria |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
haa...you made me cry reading your last poem and now you are making me laugh with your reponse bill.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You say it so well and in so many ways. Another lovely piece from you. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Now where did you come from..i didnt see you sneak in here Mark..thank you for those very nice words..nice to hear from you... ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
a capturing rapture in tones ... nice |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you MM..thank you for peeking in this afternoon..so glad you enjoyed.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Soft and silky words. You captivate with them. Sandra |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Victoria...so much sensory detail in this lovely poem...it does feel like silk! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'The choir within your voice haunts me quiet whispers in tides of the night flowing gently like waves of the sea protecting like a beacon light' So beautiful, Victoria! Loved it!! sp I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Sandra.thank you..nice to hear from you..miss you..thanks for peeking in hon.. Martie..nice of you to say..and thank you for the visit today.. snowpants..thank you..So glad you enjoyed..appreciate your kind comments.. A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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