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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-11-05 02:57 PM


The choir within your voice haunts me
  quiet whispers in tides of the night
flowing gently like waves of the sea
protecting like a beacon light
your touch soft as an Asian silk tree
your eyes and your kiss invite
intoxicating like potpourri
it was truly love at first sight

Your lips are soft as warm velvet
soothes like the strings of violins
your kisses sweet as crepe Suzette
upon slopes of alabaster skin
your voice whispers, a string quartet
upon silken leaves and violins

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A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)  



[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 11-05-2000).]

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-11-05 03:47 PM


Intoxicatingly beautiful, Victoria! Wow! Very pretty!

Denise

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thank you Denise..so glad you enjoyed...
nice to hear from you

                 ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


JamesMichael
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3 posted 2000-11-05 05:47 PM


Victoria this is a simply lovely description of the intricate delicacies of Love...James
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4 posted 2000-11-05 06:34 PM


Thank you James..alway nice hearing from you..happy you enjoyed..

                  ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Alle'cram
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5 posted 2000-11-05 06:36 PM


Victoria, girlfriend, yu the gal!!  
let us know when your book goes to press. Marcy

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6 posted 2000-11-05 06:51 PM


I can hear the music...again you exceed the last...Ron

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox


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7 posted 2000-11-05 07:00 PM


Victoria,

Beautiful work.  Ain't love grand?  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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8 posted 2000-11-05 07:09 PM


Beautiful and silky as always ~V~

~Wynter Blissfully saying goodnight  

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Victoria
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9 posted 2000-11-05 07:58 PM



Marcy..i sure will thank you for asking..my poetry book is out but my novel im still working on..thanks for stopping by and inquiring..

Ron..thank you for inspiring me to keep writing..appreciate you kind comments..  

Lone Wolf..It certainly is   thank you..nice to hear from you..

Nakthoughts..thank you Nt..good night and sweet dreams ha..hope you get over the flu  
real soon
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A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
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[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 11-05-2000).]

Irish Rose
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10 posted 2000-11-05 10:07 PM


Victoria: This is simply capitvating. Someone is in love. Gosh, I wish the entire world were!

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen



Victoria
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11 posted 2000-11-06 06:53 AM


I bet that someone is you..thank you kathleen glad you enjoyed hon..

                    ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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12 posted 2000-11-06 06:57 AM


Lovely imagery in this beautiful flowing piece...well penned Victoria  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Victoria
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13 posted 2000-11-06 12:02 PM


thank you tracie..happy you stopped by today...

                    ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Wilfred Yeats
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14 posted 2000-11-06 12:51 PM


That's SOME  voice - wooo eeee wow! - Great poem Victoria
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15 posted 2000-11-06 04:25 PM


haa...you made me cry reading your last poem and now you are making me laugh with your reponse bill..

               ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Mark Bohannan
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16 posted 2000-11-06 04:28 PM


You say it so well and in so many ways.  Another lovely piece from you.  
Victoria
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17 posted 2000-11-06 04:52 PM


Now where did you come from..i didnt see you sneak in here Mark..thank you for those very nice words..nice to hear from you...

                ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


ma miller
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18 posted 2000-11-06 04:55 PM


a capturing rapture in tones ... nice
Victoria
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19 posted 2000-11-06 05:23 PM


Thank you MM..thank you for peeking in this afternoon..so glad you enjoyed..

                 ~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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20 posted 2000-11-06 09:44 PM


Soft and silky words. You captivate with them.
Sandra

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21 posted 2000-11-06 09:47 PM


Victoria...so much sensory detail in this lovely poem...it does feel like silk!
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22 posted 2000-11-06 11:06 PM


'The choir within your voice haunts me
  quiet whispers in tides of the night
flowing gently like waves of the sea
protecting like a beacon light'

So beautiful, Victoria!  Loved it!!

sp  

I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

Victoria
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23 posted 2000-11-06 11:24 PM


Sandra.thank you..nice to hear from you..miss you..thanks for peeking in hon..

Martie..nice of you to say..and thank you for the visit today..

snowpants..thank you..So glad you enjoyed..appreciate your kind comments..


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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