Open Poetry #10 |
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The Swings In The Park. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
A little walk the other day Shook up the memory bank Sounds so familiar Sights of days gone by Watching from a distance Staring at the swings in the park Waiting for a parent and child To share a few minutes That will last a lifetime. Remembering, each swing Taking in each scream of laughter Hair over little faces Higher Daddy, higher! Aiming high for the sky Soaring back and forth. Little pleasures, little children The sweetness, and the restlesness Running, flowing, swinging,falling Time to go now, sweetie, tis' getting dark. Energy spent and gone on those weary little legs. Daddy, I'm tired! Can you carry me, please? Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Oh God if I could only return to the days of swings and my little boys were such sweet little angels. I love the children they were, but the adults they are have alot to be desired. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Very sweet write, Daniel! Enjoyed it a lot!! sp ![]() Do not go where the path may lead, but instead, go where there is no path and leave a trail. - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JD~ Gosh ... how I LOVE this ! What warm and wonderful memories you have and a *hug* for sharing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This brought back some great memories for me as well! Now I get to do it all over with the grandkids! ![]() Denise |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love this one JD..hopefully all children remember those daYs too along with the parents.. ![]() ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
inot2b, snowpants, Marge, Victoria, and dsnyder, thank you all for your replies. OH Yes those are the days where memories begin. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
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