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Winds of Change |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Winds of change blowing to me a clearer path I now see. Strong winds blow against the storm calmness envelopes me feeling warm. Dark clouds move out blue skies move in brightness returns to life again. Those days gone life not the same newness born with winds of change. On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice, Gentle Spirit! It's great when those storms move out! Denise |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Those warm winds sure do feel good Denise! Thanks for peeking in.  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
May those winds carry you to a new life. . . Great poem GS. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Loved it. Short but full of depth and to the point. jwesley |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
GS, This one speaks volumes. So glad to see the clouds moving out. It does get better with time, my friend. Wonderful thoughts!  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I have very little time this morning, but just wanted to say a really big thanks to you all!! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Gentle Spirit-- this was very beautiful! your words reflect a calm and serene nature. i am very glad to see the "storms" have gone. may many more blue skies fill your days. take care. Amy |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
Hi Gentle Spirit, Don't we have the darnest weather, winds blow this way, that way, back and forth "but" we always have a front come over first when the weather changes. Did I read all this from your excellent poem? musthave. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Aimster, the storms come, and they go.....OUR strength lies in being able to weather the storms. Thanks. Compassion, I don't know about that excellent part, but you did find the message in there. Thank you for the wonderful compliment, and for understanding. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Reminds me of a song I love. I enjoyed this so much, thank you! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Lovely words here very encouraging and so true.....very good!! I remember years ago Eric Burdon and the Animals did a song called Winds of Change it was really cool too....just like this poem. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
A lovely write GentleSprit Coco |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Rose, my thanks is to you for enjoying and taking the time to stop by. ethome, it was sort of a self encouragement to myself. Thanks for peeking in. Coco, thank you for reading. ~D |
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