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In a Man's Shoes ( A Sonnet for PDV)
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In a Man's Shoes ( A Sonnet for PDV) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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In a Man's Shoes No woman’s ever gonna put me down I let her know first off who is the boss I make the calls, she follows me around For words, though, she is never at a loss I do just what I please and where and when Free as a bird am I, but with a ring Not like some I know pecked by a hen Who never get a chance to do a thing You never told me we were going out What’s that you say, dear, dinner is at eight? Which tie goes with this suit, is this too loud? Don’t worry, Dear, I haven’t yet been late Oh, by the way, if not for my dear wife I probably would never have a life Elizabeth Santos |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
lol, I can relate to this, Well done. Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Liz, this is great! I think we gain understanding of someone when we write from their perspective. I think all schools should require an assignment like this.... walk a mile in someone's shoes...and you'll feel HIS blisters.......... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth. PVD is right, this is very good. Sy |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Delightful, Elizabeth! I love it! Denise |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I really liked this one Liz. . . gave me a smile. . . Excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Phoo Phoo! But rightous phoo phoo...unfortunately for us; if not for the fairer sex we'd probably gone the way of the dinosaurs long ago. You ladies give of a reason to be, and thank goodness you take care of us. jwesley |
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