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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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You want me to let you in but I'm not sure that I can, you wish that I could trust you but first I must know this man. You say that you want to spoil me and melt this icey heart of mine, but I fear the ice is to thick and I fear what you might find. You say that you'll be patient you know that you can break through, and that someday I will see that all of these things are true. I told you the walls were up you said you could tear them down, and on my face a smile will come when you take away my frown. You have no way of knowing just what this heart has been through, you say that it does not matter I've already fell in love with you. Your wrong, it really does matter this ice does not easily melt, yes, it will only start thawing when I know true feelings are felt. You say, it does not matter it will thaw in passing of time, that you'll someday have a home built into this heart of mine. You say that you care enough to wait for me patiently, the door to my heart will open when your love I finally see. I do not know if your right I do not know if your wrong, you say it does not matter it is time for our love song.... On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
I like the way you express these feelings; sometimes words just aren't enough; we need actions too  Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
It's time to take a chance. Beautiful poem. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
be careful, but be courageous... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
with eyes and arms wide open my friend. . . wonderful poem. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Well written poem, I enjoyed it thoroughly. However, I found your words rather painful. Please do not give up, you need to be very courageous. Cheers Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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