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In The Heart Of Loneliness
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In The Heart Of Loneliness |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
In The Heart Of Loneliness Following the beckoning of your soul I discover I am lost in the heart of loneliness Your façade of valor has drawn me in and I find I am all alone Believing the wealth of your spirit would be abundant in the riches a gallant knight, I hurried to revel in it’s warmth Now seemingly a prisoner all that I know is a cold dark dungeon of isolation. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Whisper's Caress (I love that name)~first of all, welcome to Passions.  This poem gave me a sense of being in a dank, gloomy dungeon. Very sad, but well done.Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Whisper Caress, this is very well written, I really like this poem. Very visual, well done. Oh and welcome to Passions Take care Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome (if I haven't already done so) to Passions! This is captivating and very well written. I enjoyed the intense emotion and I'm drawn to poems that seem to leave nothing out. This didn't. Hope to read more. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Thank you for the very kind replies. I am just getting to know everybody here, and am really enjoying the different styles of the many writers. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and we are certainly glad you found us, and hope that you make this your second home... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Welcome to Passions. I loved this. I'm looking forward to many more. |
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