Open Poetry #10 |
Soul Singing |
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Soul Singing Start with an easy strum mysterious in e-minor, add the play upon senses notes of a blue liner. Mix in a sultry voice she’s passion personified dynamically in tune, a singing soul inside. Now, the arrival of beat stirs the primal beast dormant with desires, it begs to be released. If the music stimulates, summons a dream sweet - breathe deep nostalgia before it quickly retreats. By then the hook is in the song is now ours to conjure spirits again, music’s magical powers. © 2000 Corinne Bailey [This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 11-04-2000).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Music truly is magical, isn't it? I loved your poem, Corinne. Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Corinne - I have always enjoyed your writings, and this one I also enjoy. Well written words you've penned. Bill |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
yes...music and poetry... we are drawn to the melodies...and held by the beat ... very cool poem C, conjured up many images.. more perfection from your poets pen cool indeed take care jm |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I can't help but be partial to poetry about music, and this one is so perfectly written! You always do such splendid work, my friend! Follow your dream! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Corinne--Music stirs the soul much like poetry...wonderful verse you've penned. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Elizabeth, thank you,and your poems are always filled with music. Bill, thank you, and I enjoy your sense of romance! Janet Marie, thank you very much! Again, glad to see you back! Sunny, thank you, and I love the graphic! Martie, thank you and I agree about poetry and music! Trying to capture that feeling some songs inspire. Corinne |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Corinne! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ Quite noteable ... enjoyed the pen of your song. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Denise and Marge! Corinne |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Music and love....an unbeatable combination, especially in your hands. Just DUET!! |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Corinne, Very beautifully written, wow! A great combination of poetry and music. What harmony. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Balladeer, shall we sing in chorus? A ballad of a duet, for those lovers that went before us? Thank you very much, Daniel! Corinne |
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