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Mystery In The Night
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Mystery In The Night |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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~Mystery In The Night~ Stretched out over the balcony she peers in the dark full moon cast a glow on this scene sound of hooves beat the ground... She steps back behind the vail of the curtain certain her long red hair blowing in the wind has given her away... Her gown damp from the night air, barely a cover his horse thunders to a stop under her window come out my love... She dares to step away, not knowing where it will lead he gasp for breath at the sight of her glowing beauty, her flowing red hair, a rare sight on this moonlit night In one swoop he pulls her to him on the saddle, off they ride, the mystery subsides... the evening tide carries them out to the endless sea, forever to be as one BloomingRose |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
WOW....the mystery to me is how you continue to write with such vivid imagery and imagination. This was a superb piece of fantasy becoming real. Love it much. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Mark, You are too kind my friend.  Hugs, Deb |
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Waverly917 Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90Hugo, MN |
This is a beautiful piece. I can see all the things you describe. You write wonderfully for the senses. Waverly917 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Oh yes. . .this one is just wonderful. . . the images leap out at me from the page. . . and I can hear the horse as it gallops out of sight. . . Excellent. . . just wonderful. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
This is wonderful! It's like something out of a Harlequin novel. This is a beautiful piece of poetry. --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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