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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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excuse me Miss I < !signature-->really do thank you for sharing your feelings with us I know many here will feel your idioms and share in your pain and sorrow I miss her too you spent your lives together and in the blink of an eye she was missing it wasn't how it was supposed to be I know how you promised her we’re forever and life’s supposed to be easy and you can’t stand her leaving when you should be together so much that you wonder whose arms will hold you whose face will offer me a blush and oh why wasn't I with you life seems meaningless with out you sure life onward goes but it’s sure empty with out you each day breaks before I go to toil I lay a rose before a stone that bears a name leaving soiled I whisper a prayer and I tell you how much "I Love you" a tear spills ever so silently as I recall those were the last words you ever said to me right before the surgery. Dale Wayne VanSickle Gwaltney © 2000 Faith Island Publishing Inc. (All Rights Reserved) Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. -Marge Tindal [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 11-03-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Lucky~ Is it no wonder Rosemary loves you so ... Your pain is as great and please know that you are understood. What a loving couple you two are ... you're both a testament as to why it works. *Hug* each other !  I love you both. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dale--this is so full of sadness and love and so tenderly written and although I'm not sure who you are speaking of or to, I know your love is true. Hugs! |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Tender words with a real wallop at the end....very good writing, lucky. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Marge, Thank you so much, such sweet words... It was kind of a hodge-podge of the many losses. Martie, I hope that explains it a little. That's what happens when you've adopted so many. Balladeer, I do thank you my friend... You seem to be on a pretty good roll yourself lately. RJ's still ROF... nice work to you. |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
You speak words of sorrow with such depth and feeling. This poem is especially tear-jerking to me, and I gaze at you with renewed awe at the power of your writing. With love, Rosemary |
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