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Flying Without Wings #2

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2000-09-26 07:49 PM

Soaring here above the clouds so high
My heart knows that you're the reason why
All I had to do
                   was close my eyes and believe
My love, I've never felt so free

Never thought I'd make it here alone
It's because of all the love you've shown
You're the only one
                   that can make me feel this way
With you, I can see a new day

Now that you're here with me my love
We're soaring here so high above
Together our love
                   can take our hearts so far
There will always be love wherever we are

Together we'll see the things
          That only love can bring
                    We're flying without wings

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Waverly917
Member

since 2000-09-23

Posts 90
Hugo, MN

1 posted 2000-09-26 11:54 PM

So true, so true. I could not put it better myself. My heart wants to fly now. I truely enjoyed this piece.

Waverly917

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

2 posted 2000-09-27 12:07 PM

sweet sven,
as always beautiful my friend! you hit me right in the heartstrings. take care sweetie.
amy

"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"

juliet_2u
Senior Member

since 2000-07-23

Posts 1125
North Carolina

3 posted 2000-09-27 12:19 PM

Sven what can I say? This is incredible. It's to tender and so full of love. What a beautiful image of romance it allows me to see.
Juls

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

4 posted 2000-09-27 10:27 AM

I loved it. So beautiful and full of feeling.
If you wrote it for some special one, she is
very very lucky!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2000-09-27 07:40 PM

Waverly, thank you. . . all you have to do is believe. . .

Amy, thank you my friend. . .

. . . I wish that you can fly like this soon. . .

Juls, thank you. . . I'm glad that you can see it. . .

inot2B, thank you so much. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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