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Suzanne Arlene
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since 2000-10-09
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Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2000-11-03 01:16 PM


The wind is warm,
It is calling your senses
To awaken and feel
all that life has to give.

Grab the moment,
It is fleeting at best.
A chance to touch your soul,
to reconnect, to forgive.

The life force within you,
needs  replenishing.
A rebirth of body,
mind and soul.

Inhale the earth.
Absorb its energy.
Bring back to yourself,
what circumstance stole.


© Copyright 2000 Suzanne Arlene - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)
1 posted 2000-11-03 01:22 PM


the energy in this poem rocks and the ending is soo cool yuh
Lighthousebob
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2 posted 2000-11-03 03:27 PM


What a refreshing restoration of one's soul can be found in "The Warm Wind."  Thank you for sharing a most vigorating experience.  Bob <><
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2000-11-03 03:30 PM


Nothing as refreshing as a warm wind...James
Butterflies_dont_cry
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4 posted 2000-11-03 04:54 PM


Welcome to Passions...this is a beautiful
poem...the warm wind does much for mind body
and soul. I will look forward to many more
works from you in the future as this was a
gem~

Martie
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5 posted 2000-11-03 05:09 PM


ah..the warm winds are blowing right now in Southern California...I love the feel...great poem!
Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 2000-11-03 05:26 PM


Yes! Sometimes circumstances do steal the most obvious. And when we get it back, it's like a rebirth of the spirit. Great theme behind this poem
Well done
Liz

Suzanne Arlene
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 377
Ontario, Canada
7 posted 2000-11-03 06:59 PM


Thank you all for your response. I think i have some gypsy in me for i do love a warm gypsy wind.Good for the soul. Thank you again  you are a wonderful group of people i have enjoyed myself in here alot  I have learned alot too. A really great place to come and just read.Such wonderful poems to in here.   Suzanne
Dr.Moose1
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8 posted 2000-11-03 09:03 PM


Suzanne,
Just had to pop in after running into you in the workshop... and what a treat ! This is some very nice writing . See ya in class .
Doc

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