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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2000-11-03 05:26 AM

I Need Eve

God I can't really look you in the eyes
still I kindof know where you're coming from.
Way before you took that rest on day seven
you already created a special blessing in heaven.
Even though you finished creating man
you weren't about to rest that seventh day
until you took a rib
and created a woman for man
and finally finished the master plan.
You called him Adam
he named her Eve.
They soon discovered
the beauty of each other
and they did conceive.
Many more did follow
as per your plan.
Each generation begot new ones
and now here we stand.
And as I look around me
I see women everywhere
still I believe only one
will truly care
and only one is destined
for my life to share.
God this is Adam
and I need Eve.
So much lovelines and beauty
to see.
Yet somehow I know
Eve is all I need.

Jameslee@November02,2000

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2000-11-03 06:33 AM

James, this is stunning
Kethry

Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

2 posted 2000-11-03 06:40 AM

James~
This is so captivating...an incredible write, you've done well my friend
TRacie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-11-03 08:54 AM

OH SWEET BABY JAMES ...
you just need to be kissed for this one...
my goodness darlin'
this is so sincere and so ... so ...
I lack the words at the moment...to tell you the emotional effect it had on me...
this is one of your finest pieces of poetry..
this one comes from a higher place..
exceptional poetry ... truely..I hope you
submitted this one for the main site..
and its a must for the next book...

And as I look around me
I see women everywhere
still I believe only one
will truly care
and only one is destined
for my life to share.
God this is Adam
and I need Eve.
So much lovelines and beauty
to see.
Yet somehow I know
Eve is all I need.
==========
wow baby...wow!!!!!
later-grace-from-your-pen-gator
jm

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2000-11-03 09:04 AM

James - your writings are always with so much meaning. Nice job, my friend.

Bill

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2000-11-03 09:30 AM

James~ you are such a sweetheart of a man.....this is so emotional.......I love this.

-SEA

Rainydays
Member

since 2000-10-21

Posts 324

6 posted 2000-11-03 09:34 AM

If this is written from your heart, James, I hope He brings her to you. Such a lovely way of expressing the need for completion that so many of us are looking for, it seems. Wonderfully written, and I thank you.

Rainydays

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2000-11-03 04:29 PM

Thank you Kethry, tracie, Janet, Bill, Sea and Rainydays...Janet I could just kiss you for all the nice things you said to me...really touched my heart...thank you...James

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

8 posted 2000-11-03 10:08 PM

James* This is an awesome poem!! The depth
of your writing has come to a new level in
this poem...you reached in deep and came out
with an excellent weave. One of your best
in my honest opinion James~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2000-11-04 10:18 PM

beautiful James. . . I know that we've all said this at one time or another. . . you've captured it very well here. . .

excellent. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

10 posted 2000-11-04 11:31 PM

James,
Well written, the real poet shows here. Great reading.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2000-11-16 05:46 PM

Thank you Butterflies, Sven and Daniel for the nice responses...yes I want my Eve...James

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

12 posted 2000-11-16 05:56 PM

I truly enjoyed reading this James. I've not a history here to know what your poems have been like, but this sample is delightful. Rainydays' response is the easiest for me to echo, wholeheartedly. S/he has said so well what I might have tried to say.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2001-07-30 02:43 AM

Thank you Vas for your lovely response...James

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