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Waiting for you
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Waiting for you |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
So what is it that keeps you at bay, phone calls and messages going astray Time is gone before it even came, it seems forever since I have heard your name. Messages typed and left on the phone, wondering if they have reached you, my answer unknown. I hope that soon what's kept you at bay will give you a chance to call by my way. Expressions, are the most important aspects, they create impressions |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
at the risk of sounding like a broken record, i know exactly how this feels. i think i'm just giving up. i like the theme of this one. it's simple, but described on many different fronts. cool stuff. i dig it. Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
There's nothing worse than waiting...but don't wait too long because you'll lose and it will hurt..very nice poem!! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
can relate on this one too, recognize the silence and the pain. you expressed your feelings from your heart, well done. (((warm hug)) Charisma |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
the allusive answer...and sometimes it never comes...yep, I can relate to this too. Good write. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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