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Weaving the Fabric of Romance(Sven's old challenge)
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Weaving the Fabric of Romance(Sven's old challenge) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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He used to think poetry was for boring, stuffy, arty-farty, pretentious types Until he met this angelic bubbly whom made him feel so fulfilled His pen firmly grasped, he couldn't write fast enough to dedicate his affection for her The fabric of romance weaved, he finally caught hold of fleeting happiness, contented with his new-found loves in his life |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Kaile, poetry does seem to have that image at times, good to see someone being converted, and what better way than through romance. a wonderful poem. Poets unite...sorry getting carried away. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent kaile, it's wonderful how romance can make us do the most interesting things. . .like write poetry. . . This is great. . . challenge well met. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
The things romance will make us do! Nothing like getting caught up in verse because of it! Well done!  <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thank you all for reading and replying... this poem was actually based on a true experience of mine...last year, a friend of mine fell in love and was soon penning down poems as a dedication to her boyfriend....i remembered feeling amused then...little did i know that one year later, i would attempt to pick up my poetic pen and imitate her too |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
kaile- this is so true...there's nothing like romance to inspire one to write. enjoyed this much. -vicky |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
OOh.... This is just proof that love  can indeed change one's perspective of life, and everything that it encompasses. Great job done here, Kaile!_,,,^.^,,,_ |
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