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Ron K. Fox
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0 posted 2000-11-02 11:06 AM


Whispers
Running
Across the sands
Skin
So soft
Glides beneath my hands
Tender
Lips
That I do so seek
Knees
Tremble
Oh so weak
Eyes
Glisten
Between the stars
Love’s
Rhythm
Like Spanish guitars
Treasures
Captured
For us to keep
Dreams
Revealed
In gentle sleep



[This message has been edited by Ron K. Fox (edited 11-02-2000).]

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1 posted 2000-11-02 11:14 AM


RonK~ I sure like the way this feels..... -SEA
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2 posted 2000-11-02 11:21 AM


This felt so real
sand in my bed
is what I feel

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3 posted 2000-11-02 12:15 PM


Soft and flowing like sand slipping through
my fingers....this is beautiful work~

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4 posted 2000-11-02 12:19 PM


Beautiful simplicity - works for me - every time - Good one Ron
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5 posted 2000-11-02 04:47 PM


Beautiful Ron, such a gentle read.  Bonnie
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6 posted 2000-11-02 05:20 PM


dreamy piece.....love it....and enjoyed reading it....
well done

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7 posted 2000-11-02 05:25 PM


Hello Ron. The format of this poem succeeds in allowing the reader to focus on each lovely detail. You've been very creative and clever with this Dreamy piece of writing. Thank you ~

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8 posted 2000-11-02 05:32 PM


thats what i need right now..a trip to the beach all by myself haa...sounds lovely ron..

             ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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