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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Whispers Running Across the sands Skin So soft Glides beneath my hands Tender Lips That I do so seek Knees Tremble Oh so weak Eyes Glisten Between the stars Love’s Rhythm Like Spanish guitars Treasures Captured For us to keep Dreams Revealed In gentle sleep [This message has been edited by Ron K. Fox (edited 11-02-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RonK~ I sure like the way this feels.....  -SEA |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
This felt so real sand in my bed is what I feel |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Soft and flowing like sand slipping through my fingers....this is beautiful work~ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Beautiful simplicity - works for me - every time - Good one Ron |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Beautiful Ron, such a gentle read. Bonnie |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
dreamy piece.....love it....and enjoyed reading it.... well done Charisma |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Hello Ron. The format of this poem succeeds in allowing the reader to focus on each lovely detail. You've been very creative and clever with this Dreamy piece of writing. Thank you ~ Rainydays |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thats what i need right now..a trip to the beach all by myself haa...sounds lovely ron.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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