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With Each Passing Day
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With Each Passing Day |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Don't think twice, Love; It'll only bring you pain. Don't doubt what we have; You'll only be torn away. I don't want To see the day That I watch you walk away; I couldn't bear the pain. I don't want Just an ordinary life; I long to spend my days Growing old with you, Watching you become More beautiful each day. What you are to me Is more than you'll ever know. I've grown to appreciate who you are; I love what I see When I open my eyes After each kiss. Please understand that I know I could never Look at another The way I look at you. Tell me what you need; Let me know what your soul requires. I want to be the one you turn to, The way you did before. Don't allow the hands of time To tear us apart; I long to know more of you With each passing day. Do not go where the path may lead, but instead, go where there is no path and leave a trail. - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Wonderful sentiments! Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
What a wonderful way to express your desire to please and cherish the one you love. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Ohh...you've touched me with this one. A simple heart you write with here! and so sincerely...therein is the beauty. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Jamie: thanks! Ron: thank you! I'm glad you liked it!  serenity: well, thank you! I'm glad you stopped by!!  sp Do not go where the path may lead, but instead, go where there is no path and leave a trail. - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ditto all the above my friend, jwesley |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
If we all loved this well and this wisely; how wonderful the world would be!!! Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
jwesley: thanks for stopping by!! pepper: wow! thank you for your kind words, my friend!! glad you liked it!! sp Do not go where the path may lead, but instead, go where there is no path and leave a trail. - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SnowPants~ A commitment to love is essential to the continuation ... These are lovely thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Kris~ this was utterly beautiful! your words and feelings in this are very powerful and intense. i could feel the fustration and the longing. great work my friend!! talk to you later. take care --Amy-- p.s. save a cup of cawfee for me will ya LOL  "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Marge: you are right, my friend! Thanks!! Amy: thanks so much!! I'm glad you enjoyed it!! glad you could stop by!! sp Do not go where the path may lead, but instead, go where there is no path and leave a trail. - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A wonderful expression of your admiration and desires...James |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Thanks James! I'm glad you enjoyed it!! sp Do not go where the path may lead, but instead, go where there is no path and leave a trail. - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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