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To Be The One |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 I want to find the fairy tale To live within that perfect scene To make a wish that will not fail To believe in things not yet seen I want to find my dream come true To skip from cloud to cloud with glee To dance in the spring rain with you To kiss the childlike hope in me I want to touch the moonbeam's ray To blow star dust free from my hands To run barefoot with heart of play To roam the beach of pure white sands I want to taste the purest love To lay in a chestnut fire glow To see faith take wing with a dove To trust enough that I just know I want to be held throughout the night To spend days in carefree laughter To be the one in which they write ~Lived Happily Ever After~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Don't know what to say but "B E A U T I F U L", and what a dream to have. I hope it has or will come true for you. jwesley |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
How beautiful is this!!!!! You will find all those things, Butterflies, because you have a good heart and you are a good person. LOVE the graphic!!!! Being happy doesn't mean everything's perfect; it just means you've decided to see beyond the imperfections. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Stunning writing and a wonderful vision of life...if only...(doesn't that make ya wanna shed a lil' tear????? Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Holly- this is so beautiful.  you have penned the dreams of so many of us. wonderfully done. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
this was beautiful both in words and graphics |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
this was beautiful both in words and graphics |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
**To make a wish that will not fail** **To believe in things not yet seen** **To kiss the childlike hope in me** I want to touch the moonbeam's ray To blow star dust free from my hands To run barefoot with heart of play To roam the beach of pure white sands I want to taste the purest love To lay in a chestnut fire glow To see faith take wing with a dove **To trust enough that I just know** ================= *sigh* ..dont we all baby...dont we all... this is soooooooo.....YOU KNOW!!! ... when ya find the answers to all the longing and unrequited things listed here,... then there wont be no need for poetry  yayayaya now thats a worry...*smile* love this one me SS...ya know its engraved on my heart >>To trust enough that I just know<< UUMMM...can you speak this in a language a moth will know...lol love ya me PS way cool graphics |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
jwesley* It means so much to see your kind comment thank you~ Balladeer* I'll never give up...I'm pretty hard headed Thank you so much~Jamie* yes....if only...and nope I never cry for my own...lol Thank you~ Vicky* This is truly dedicated to those of us that still believe in the fairytale...so glad that you enjoyed it, thank you~ RB* Thank you very much~ JM* My sweet SS...if it were in Mothenese would we listen??? Love ya! Thank you for never leaving to burn in the flame alone Someone needs to stoke the fire...yeppers you KNOW! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'I want to be held throughout the night To spend days in carefree laughter To be the one in which they write ~Lived Happily Ever After~' Beautiful, Butterflies! What a great dream!! I loved it!! sp Do not go where the path may lead, but instead, go where there is no path and leave a trail. - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
You have truely captured what dreams are made of Simply beautiful, Rich |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
SP* Thank you so much...let's hope it isn't Just a dream Rich* Yes it is...one I'd like to make come true...thank you very much for reading~ |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Your wish is so beautifully expressed, Holly...may it come true. Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
   I bow for you, and hope that all your wishes come true.... I know that I add a thread to this one.... excellent write (((hugs))) Charisma |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Elizabeth* My thanks to you from the bottom of my heart~ Charisma* Awwwwwe thanks...love the gift of graphics...the fairy is perfect, and your comments touched my heart thank you~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Beautiful is a word that only just begins to describe this one my friend. You have woven the feelings into your words so very well, once again your words have touched me. What would we be without our dreams? "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
the graphic and the poem is just gorgeous loved them both BDC.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A lovely way to share your desires...James |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful poem and beautiful presentation, butterflies and thanks for your very nice comments about my poem! Nathan |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Butterfly--I think you have spoken the dream of so many in this lovely poem. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ I could just hug your neck for this little beauty ! Perfect ! *Thanks for the e-mail ! Made my day !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Just beautiful, in every way. And you know what? That is the same dream I have. It sure is hard to make it happen, though. Awesome poem. Sandra |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Butterflies-Beautiful and tender, you captured my heart with this one! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Eagle* See my friend...you are not at all alone in your love and search of the fairy tale..never give up on your dreams...thank you my biased friend~ Victoria* Thank you very much~ James* A pleasure to have you read..thank you~ Nathan* Thank you...and my reply didn't do your poem justice..it was great!! Martie* My fellow dreamer thank you very much~Marge* Hugs are always gladly accepted Thank you my dear friend..and the e-mail was my pleasure~Sandra* Never stop chasing that dream...sooner or later it will get tire of running from you! Thank you~ Gemini* So very kind of you to share such a beautiful comment...thank you~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
BDC, Now this is what dreams are made of. Simply beautiful, butterfly! May all your dreams come true for you my friend. You deserve it. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
"Perfect" is the word that comes immediately to mind - when I find a better one I'll post another response as I'll probably read this one again and again - it speaks so well to me |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
LW* As do yours my friend...thank you from the bottom of my heart~ Sir Poet Bill* You are so very sweet, I'm glad I could share my dream...thank you~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh this is so gorgeous and that graphic is so beautiful.....FANTASTIC WRITE Loved the ending my favTracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Me too. Thanks for a pleasant, pleasing moment. (Pretty graphic, too) Melton |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
BDC, this beautiful, beautiful poem soars it has it's own magic. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Holly-- your writing always has an amazing effect on me...but this takes the cake! this is beautiful!! i pray to God all of your wishes come true, you truly deserve them to! You have penned your heart here and I thank you for sharing yourself with us. Holly, you have a beautiful heart and spirit. and i can say that because i know you're poetry and so therefore i feel as though i know you. Take care. love ya, Amy |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
BDC~ sweet sweet hearted friend....this is stunning.........Wow! Beyond beautiful. -SEA |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
the last line is yuh! the rest is yuh too |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
the last line is yuh! the rest is yuh too |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Butterflies, A beautiful vision , thanks for sharing it with us. doc |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Tracie* We are all looking for the happy ending aren't we Thank you so much~Melton* It was my pleasure to share it...thank you for reading~ Kethry* Thank you so very much..your comment was so beautiful~ Amy* There are times when we have to let the walls in and let the hope and dreams have their wings...thank you my dear friend~ Sea* Thank you so much...I truly appreciate your kind comments~ W.O.W. Double thanks Doc* And thank you for reading |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Dreams painted on the pallet of angel wings Fairy tales of the heart found in verse Hopes of reality found as the butterfly sings Removing the confines of yesterday's curse It is all in the heart and in what you can do As we all have the power to change what we will The secrets rest in the soul with many a clue Telling of dreams lost by simply sitting still So go and make all of your fantasies become real Don't let those that don't believe, take away that Go out and take charge, do not get caught sitting still For you and your strength I will forever tip my hat ================= If anyone had the power to make their dreams come true my friend, it would be you and of that I have no doubts at all. Wonderful write from you and as the others have said, you have penned the dreams of so many with this one. Absolutely beautiful. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Mark* Such a beautiful poetic reply...It is truly an honor. I'm so happy you've reached your destination safely and that you are able to drop in here...thank you for your beautiful reply my friend...thank you from the bottom of my heart~ |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
This is so enchantingly, awesomely beautiful!!! The graphics are lovely; and the song, the story you write with this poem are something from a beautiful dream May it come true!!!!Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Pepper* Many thanks to you...I'm hoping that if it's a dream...I never wake up |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A Beautiful dream A beautiful poem Excellent write Liz |
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