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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-09-26 11:16 AM

I read your words with care
bringing them in to me
there hope, pain and salvation
allowed small glimpses of your soul to see.
Of this I say to you
pray quick and do not cease,
for answers come to those who dance
among the avenues of hypocracy.
Of wishfull trances that we endure
to see the lillies bloom again,
not the devils that grasp at cures
which bring us down to them.
Hold fast those tears streaming down
covet them like precious pearls,
each one emplores a memory of you
that this life could bring you your world.
And wander closely to the edge peace
to stare at those who rage for it,
smile gently for hearts in pain
as you send sweet kisses of hope,
from your butterfly wings.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2000-09-26 11:42 AM

Michael-This is a beautiful rendering of YOUR heart and such a wonderful tribute in celebration of the MOST BEAUTIFUL butterfly that has ever graced the heavens. I personally thank you for seeing the beauty and heart of my friend and you gotta know that this one goes in my library.

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

2 posted 2000-09-26 01:31 PM

Michael, I have to agree with Mark here. She is indeed a wonderful person and this is a beautiful tribute to her.

This poem beyond a doubt, is truly a reflection of your warm and loving heart. Of this I know......

Love ya,
Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

3 posted 2000-09-26 03:41 PM

Michael*
I'm so touched that you would be moved to write a poem for me....what a beautiful piece...and no that's not JUST because I'm biased...

The flow of this was excellent and to evoke such poetry from you through mine...I'm without words to express what I feel besides deeply touched. This is an honor...thank you Michael from the bottom of my heart...and to your message in the poem...I will~

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-09-26 04:19 PM

this place is so special..
seems the room is full of butterflies and
poetic hearts...
yours shine with this gift Michael..
sincere, beautiful words gentle poet
me

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2000-09-26 04:55 PM

Michael,
Breathtaking!
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

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