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When love comes knocking
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When love comes knocking |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
When love comes knocking at my door, What time will it be? I have to know, to be precise Can't mess up the very thought of paradise. When love comes knocking at my door, Will there be a secret code, Where I alone will only know When love comes knocking at my door. When love comes in the door, Will I be able to comprehend? That you are there standing before me now Will I invite you to stay Or only be all in a disarray? When your inside the door of my life. Maybe I need more information Just in case I'm all displaced when love comes knocking at my door. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I've a feeling you'll know! Very nice, I enjoyed this! Denise |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
thanks Denise love shows it's face in so many ways your absolutely right. |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
Just be sure it IS love you are letting in. Or woe is you  |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Just open your heart and let it in This was wonderful writing~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I enjoyed this very much. Doors keep people out but boy, they can sure let the right one inside! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Love knocks quite often, Rosebud1229, often fleetingly, yet love nevertheless. It slips itself into our hearts, nourishes our soul and then say's goodbye for awhile. And sometimes, when all seems just right, it nestles down and stays awhile, or forever. But it's all love, momentary, or forever, an thought we feel an ache at it's loss, we grow from it's touch, each time. Those that suffer from it's spell fail to accept it for what it is...a time, a place, two hearts entwined, but still drifting in the stream. When love comes knocking at your door to stay, you'll feel the breeze because you no longer tumble in it's flow. hmmm...no sure what all THAT has to do with the wonderful piece your wrote, but it's what it sparked. Nice read, my friend... jwesley |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
so right make sure it's the right one knocking guess it wouldn't hurt to take a peek to make sure. Jwesley, your right love is entertwined and woven into our hearts, and when the right person comes along you know it, just as important to build on a relationship and let it flow easily as you said, you can love someone but to be in love is ten times better, Lonely stranger so right, be just a little liery if they offering way to many gifts. You can't buy someone's love, Butterflies don't cry your so right opening the heart is the only way to let love in. Irish Rose thanks for your sweet reply. Love is a mysterious thing I'll say that for sure. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I think the beauty of Love is you will absolutely positively know beyond a shadow of a doubt...of course the pain of Love would be revealed if the other didn't feel the same way..the mystery of Love is that it will come to you and you will be wondering what you did to deserve it...but it will be their embracing you...and it won't let go and it won't go away...Love will love you...James |
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