Open Poetry #10 |
It's Just A Shoe |
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
It's Just A Shoe It's just a shoe I saw on the living room floor, black sequined, high heeled, laying on it's side where she'd kicked it off as she stumbled in the door. We'd danced and played late into the night and finally came home, slightly high, giggling, shssshing, as we tried not to wake the kids, and giggling again, as that sparkling shoe bounced off the lamp to land in the middle of the room. She's sleeping now, this wife of mine, though mornings come and the sun is kissing her cheek. I sip my coffee and smile in thought… It's just a shoe, I think again, but how I love that woman, who puts it on her feet. w.james beard, jr. |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
JWesley, Oh this is precious. Just a shoe, but what a love! Thank you, I like this very much. (loved the "shssshing") Rainydays |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
HEY YOU!!!!!!! where you been????? and this is WONDERFUL.... what a sweet and endearing poem ... such a tender peek into your heart.. lucky lady she is ... nice to see you posting. take care jm |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Thanks,Rainydays, the "shssshing" just seemed to fit. And JM - thanks much...missed you too. Been sidetracked by other things...writing seemed to be last in line...was hoping I still could and you know me...romance seemed to be the place to start again... jwesley |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Romance is always the best place to start...I loved the idea in this....how one small object can bring back so many thoughts...what a GREAT write this is!!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JWesley~ Oh ... Cinderella's come home ! What a romantic notion you've shared with us. I just darned well like it ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JWesley~ So good to see your name again!! This is SO romantic......what a sweet man.....*SIGH*.......loved this. -SEA |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This was just a delight in every way... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
"SIGH" this is so romantic...and I think that you are one hell of a romanticus...your wife is lucky with you....you have given a great imagery of your story....the shoe... Im glad that I came in, to find this one. "SUPERB" Charisma |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Thank you all for your warm and gracious thoughts. Been reading a lot the last day or so...nice to be back in here. jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 11-02-2000).] |
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