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Ron K. Fox
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0 posted 2000-10-31 10:40 AM


Sea hope your spirits are up...and your sweet cinnamon eyes are smiling...thank you for all your wonderful poems and kind responses

Even in her rage
She is beautiful.
I could lay on her shores forever
Forever

Waves tossed back
Like wind blown hair
Wild and free
Alluring

Her surface
An endless dance of rhythm
Undulating
A chorus of movement
To leave me in a trance

Her depths gaze back as eyes
Dark mysterious
Fathom upon fathom I would dive
Just to lose my breath
Drown within them

To be swept away
By gentle tides
Guided by the moon’s hand
Then lay on her shoreline
Sated, content.

On her shores I would lay forever
Forever kissed by caressing waves
Gazing at her beauty
For the sea is love
Blending into the horizon forever
Forever



Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

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1 posted 2000-10-31 10:44 AM


RonK~ WOW......I am so blown away...... **SIGH** how beautiful and so sweet! I am all smiles   Thank you so much for this amazing poem......Just wonderful.....thank you!! -SEA
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2 posted 2000-10-31 12:01 PM


RonFox~
What a wonderful write for a wonderful poet !
She's all that and more.
~*Marge*~


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3 posted 2000-10-31 12:03 PM


RonK~ had to read and re-read this gem.......I just love this.thank you soooooo much!!   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


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4 posted 2000-10-31 12:16 PM


you're welcome...thank you for being so inspirational and supportive. thanks!

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

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5 posted 2000-10-31 12:20 PM


RonK~ Dear friend you are SO welcome!   -SEA
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6 posted 2000-10-31 12:29 PM


Ahem....I haven't even left on my trip yet and what do I find??? And SEA, here you go giving out *sighs* to another poet!!!!  ROFL...
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Seriously Ron, this is beautiful just as is the poet you wrote it for.  You have found part of the true beauty in her with this lovely piece and I applaud not only your writing but your heart as well.  Take a bow my man.  

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Mark~ darling....you know you are the only one I flirt outrageously with........I am not a fickle girl, you however are much too free with your hugs...shall we go there?!   Hugs Baby........-SEA
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8 posted 2000-10-31 12:35 PM


Baby, you know that I only jest with you. If someone wrote me a poem as lovely as this(and you do so deserve it my sweet friend) then I too would be apt to give more than a hug or two.  You sigh away my sweet and if I were Ron, I would be wanting a kiss as well LOL..(but just a small one okay?lol)  hugs and kisses to you my sweet.
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9 posted 2000-10-31 01:12 PM


RonK~ Mark said I can kiss you....pucker up!!   ( don't look Mark )   -SEA
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10 posted 2000-10-31 03:15 PM


WOOOWW...Thanks Sea...and thanks Mark for giving her the idea!

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

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RonK~ You are SO welcome....... -SEA
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12 posted 2000-10-31 08:23 PM


Bumped this up for SEA...maybe it'll brighten her up..as it had earlier..hope no one minds.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

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13 posted 2000-11-01 03:34 AM


wonderful penned Ron....lovely tribute for our lovely Sea.......you have done a great job.

((hugs))
Charisma

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