Lover's Bliss (part 2 of 3)

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Jeffrey Carter

Member Elite

since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

0 posted 2000-09-26 06:20 AM

As we stand here in the darkness
I feel you trembling with desire
And those three words you said to me
Raise passion ever higher

Nothing sounds as sweet
As my name upon your lips
As you explore in gentle wonder
With searching fingertips

A lover's game of hide and seek
Where you and I both win
The entensity ever higher soars
As I touch your heated skin

The wanting grows between us
With every breath we take
And the need just gets stronger
With every promise that we make

TO BE CONTINUED.........

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2000-09-26 06:27 AM

Now I must find part one. This is tease, cutting us off like this. How long til part three?
A lovely poem, incidentally
Liz

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2000-09-26 07:02 AM

What a treasure hunt I had. You struck gold with this. Part 3 soon please?
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

3 posted 2000-09-26 08:58 AM

*whistles* well well well mr jeffrey what a little gem we have here. where is part three?? can't wait to read!!
take care.
amy

"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

4 posted 2000-09-26 10:31 PM

I am waiting with bated breath for part three...cmon cmon GIVE...

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2000-09-26 10:49 PM

HEY YOU...do ya gotta permit to BURN in the forums...
YEEEE HA...dang boy.. this is a tastee tease..
bring it on baby ...YOU KNOW we WANT it and
YOU KNOW you WANT too

LOL
VERY sensual and very nice...VERY
just read part one and then slid on over here LOL

(hehe)

"Nothing sounds as sweet
As my name upon your lips
As you explore in gentle wonder
With searching fingertips"

love that verse..very cool while very hot
later-incinerator-gator LOL
jm

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

6 posted 2000-09-26 10:56 PM

Ok....so I WON'T go to bed just yet!!!! I'm waiting....hehehe

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2000-09-26 11:39 PM

Jeffrey,

You take off a while and come back and leave us hanging???? You are such a tease!!!!! That is not very nice!!!! Great writing my friend. Waiting part three . . . hmmm, hmmm, hmmmmmm . . .

Lone Wolf

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Snowdwen
Member

since 2000-09-16

Posts 75
Louisiana

8 posted 2000-09-27 04:14 AM

Wow Part ones was good and the secound even better I'm looking forwared to the third!
Michell

"You live you learn and life moves on"

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