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spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2000-10-30 10:38 PM

A growing longing for embrace
The flowing lines my fingers trace
The twinkle in your loving eyes
To feel the warmth inside your thighs

The passing touch of tip to tip
Our tongues pass just beyond the lips
To feel my hair stand up in line
The chills run up my spine

And yet the silence breaks again
Exhale of breath, a scream within
Empowered as my cautions fly
No longer used as alibi

To hide that which I did not know
Would cause such pleasure and yet grow
To a presence unattained
That can quenched these dire needs

So travel with me to this land
Where growing embers fill this man
Where dreams aren’t all they seem to be
I offer dreams fulfilled in me.

[This message has been edited by spiked (edited 10-31-2000).]

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-10-30 10:41 PM

okay. You talked me into it. (mmm. mmm. you do know it's MY holiday? don't you?)

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2000-10-30 10:57 PM

Spiked~ this is very sensual..I liked this a lot!

-SEA

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2000-10-30 11:03 PM

spiked-
   very beautiful and romantic.
   i like it lots.

   -vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

4 posted 2000-10-30 11:23 PM

Rich...this is exquisite...sensual seductive...dripping...wink

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

5 posted 2000-10-31 12:08 PM

Thank you serenity happy hallowed me sweet
Vicky and SEA nice to see I've done you justice
Paula nicely effective aye
Thank you all
Rich

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

6 posted 2000-10-31 03:55 AM

travel with you to this land,
is this an invitation hon...
you know the right words to tell..
love it....

well done.

Charisma

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

7 posted 2000-10-31 11:34 AM

Thank You Charisma,
Rich

[This message has been edited by spiked (edited 11-01-2000).]

Catcridder
New Member

since 2000-10-31

Posts 1
Waterloo, Nebraska, USA

8 posted 2000-10-31 10:11 PM

My aunt, wanted me to read your poem.. I can tell you I really liked it.. very sensual and hot... keep it up... cathy

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

9 posted 2000-11-01 04:17 PM

Thanks Catcridder and also thank your aunt it is truely flattering that she would choose to recommend my poems.
Rich

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

10 posted 2000-11-01 04:17 PM

Thanks Catcridder and also thank your aunt it is truely flattering that she would choose to recommend my poems.
Rich

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

11 posted 2000-11-01 06:59 PM

Wow, temperature going up!!! What a siren call....you may have a crowd coming your way

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Pepper
"I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place"
Ram Dass

[This message has been edited by peppermint35 (edited 11-01-2000).]

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