Open Poetry #10 |
Vacation Blues |
Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
My back aches, my feet hurt, and my toes are turning blue My skin's raw and my eyes bulge and I don't know what to do My personal physician says my odds would be improvin If I cut back on activities, but I know there's nothin doin The shock of the pavement comin up my shoes is bruisin both my feet And a blistered blister on a calloused corn can never be real neat I thought another job would help me my bills pay But now I'm just a-livin for the checks that come payday My teeth itch, my ears ring, and I think I've got the flu I've got eye bags, my sides hurt, but what else can I do Just a few more hours of sleep would get my body healin But I've gotta pull another shift, so I better get a movin Bussin tables, milkiin cows, I sell flowers on the side And ever odd day I fix cars, but I can't afford a ride Every mornin early I go on my paper routes Then I sit at a telephone hard-selling laundry chutes My back aches, my feet hurt, and my toes are turnin blue My teeth itch, my ears ring, and I think I've got the flu I worked my little hiney off at jobs both far and near And that is what I did on my vacation time this year Alicat If I were any more laid back, I'd be in a coma. |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
well alicat, making ends meet is a tough...and I remember reading some work prior to this about you working so hard and your brother has it easy(or more money)...something along that line...hey nothing wrong with being a jack of all trades...know the feeling. Hang in there...your lucky numbers may be waiting. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I know what you mean, 'cat. I HATE it when my teeth itch!!!! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Alicat~ poor baby, sounds like you need a cat nap the flow to this is perfect...it reads great..enjoyed -SEA |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
another good one...ha... enjoyed ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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