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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 "Goodbye" I wasn't the one that wanted to say goodbye, or made the distance between us caused through a lie. I wasn't the one that was playing a game..... playing with feelings that includes so much pain. I still can't understand, why you have done this to me... or were you afraid to tell me, that you wanted to be free? maybe there was someone else, that crossed up your mind.... was that the reason, that you decided to leave me behind. Don't know the reason, why we had to say goodbye... don't know the reason, why you have made me cry..... and I really don't know, what you were up too... but I do know, that my love for you was true. I still can't believe that we are going our own way.. we have shared a lot, and now nothing more that I could say.... I love you, still care, but filled with fright for your lie.... my sweetlove, my love, that is my reason to say "Goodbye"! Charisma don't worry, I'm all over it.  [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 10-30-2000).] |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Ouch! I can only imagine your pain, Charisma, but it's a good thing you're all over it. Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Charisma~ this made me want to reach through the screen and hug you..I was so upset for you, then I read you are over it.I'm glad you aren't hurting...this is a wonderfully expressed poem. -SEA |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Elizabeth: thank you, and yes when I wrote this one, pain was killing me than. glad that I am over it. Sea: you are really heartwarmend....when I going through that, I could use that hug... thank you my friend for your kindness. and I am certainly glad that Im being over it now. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Charisma, Glad to see this is not a recent piece of writing. Good for you. It is nice to know you have worked those feelings out. It is always for the best. Nice writing. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I see that you certainly know what I have been feeling lately. This is a great poem, and the words touch my heart so directly. I'm glad you are not still hurting like this, and it gives me hope that I will stop, too. Take care. Sandra |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
It takes a strong herat to say goodbye...glad it's over and you are your smiling sele. Best always Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
WOW Charisma..I just love that pic goes perfect with your words........ ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
WOW Charisma..I just love that pic goes perfect with your words........ WHOOPSSSSSSSSS it double posted and I don't know how so I will say how much I loved it again... ~Wynter< !signature--> "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 10-30-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Charisma, loved the piccie loved the poem. Loved it all be well Keth Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Lone wolf: thank you for your kind reply, and yes I am glad that I have worked out the most of these feelings, poetry have helped me a lot to deal with it. Catalinamoon: I am quite sure that time will heal your wounds, I was hurt very deeply never thought that I could release this pain. (((warm hug))).... Ron: yeah I'm glad too that its over, thank for your kind reply. Nakthoughts: well thank you, I'm glad that you feel it that way too, and I love that double post......  Kethry: I'm glad that you loved it all, thanks for stopping by. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Awsome graphics, to a sad poem Though it's over, it still helps to write about it. Poetry helps define your feelings Good work Liz |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Elizabeth I am glad that you like it. thanks for your reply . |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
Charisma, this is a very sad poem, but so it is so lovely to read. Jon |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You have shared this goodbye in a tender way...James |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Charisma, Thank you for sharing these difficult moments of your life with us here at Passions. I appreciate the pain you had to endure. Big huge HUGS for you. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've expressed yourself well in this piece Charisma ... a wonderfully moving verse, with sentiments that many can relate to at different points in our lives. I'm glad poetry gave you the outlet to help deal with this sorrow. Nicely done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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SouthernStar Junior Member
since 2000-10-30
Posts 23Georgia |
So glad to hear your heart is healed. Very nice poem also. Tessa |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very well written/expressed, my friend. Many hugs from me too. jwesley |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
jonmcm : thank you for your lovely reply James: thank you for stopping by, and I love to share my feelings here. Daniel: thank you for your *big hug*...its always nice to receive them... Kit: thank you for your kind comment, yes poetry gives me a way to deal with pain....and I am glad that I am blessed with this gift, I only have regrets that I started so late with writing. it gives so many pleasure aswel. Tessa: thank you, and I'm glad that my heart is health too, still with a leftover, but can deal with that.... jwesley: thank you for stopping by and also for the hugs....they are always welcome.... |
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