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Open Poetry #10

forever makes yesterdays last ...

ma miller
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

0 posted 2000-10-30 04:10 PM

forever makes yesterdays last ...

with hands clinched tight
vowing never to lose sight
of the moment we shared
in a singular light
by the creek of our dreams
as yesterday it still seems

in my memory's moment of then
eyes of jade's sparkling gem
fixed upon mine of hazeled blue
for an eternity sent
to the creek of our lives
as a yesterday just arrived

we found what was amiss
in the capture of this
our instant of mutual
realization's kiss
as the creek of our past
forever makes yesterdays last

M.A. Miller
10.30.00

My calling before me, let quill be my offering;
For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive.

M.A.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2000-10-30 04:16 PM

this is beautiful!!

-SEA

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

2 posted 2000-10-30 09:46 PM

Mark...you know how I am about the water my friend...and this just flows right thru me...beautiful

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

3 posted 2000-10-30 10:10 PM

Thank you for the wonderful read, lifted my spirits again.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2000-10-30 10:18 PM

I love these words. Peaceful, loving, and a perfectly flowing poem.
Sandra

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2000-10-31 12:32 PM

MAMiller~

'for an eternity sent
to the creek of our lives
as a yesterday just arrived'

My, what a lovely line.
I enjoyed this entire read.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

6 posted 2000-10-31 03:29 AM

Love it....and it was a real pleasure to read this flowing one......well done

Charisma

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

7 posted 2000-10-31 05:15 AM

MA,
This is terrific work, my friend... keep writing for I find me within these lines...

regards,
Sudhir

ma miller
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

8 posted 2000-10-31 10:50 AM

thanks to all above who've taken the time to browse my simplicities ...

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2000-10-31 11:08 AM

Enjoyed it!!!!!!!

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