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This Clouded Heart
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This Clouded Heart |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
"This Clouded Heart" The sky awaits to shed its eyes of showers rests low upon the hills beyond the wood as newly brewed my tea arouses daybreak its earth and almond steaming understood Eyes searching past the doorway to the gardens and thinking on a morning such as this I nearly hear your steps approach behind me and feel the steaming sweetness of your kiss As scarlet skies stream tears into the valley and as the teasing tea brings me awake another day begins beneath the shadows another day this clouded heart to ache Rainydays |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Oh, I love this. I can feel the lonely, early morning. Hope you feel better. Much love all, Krissie |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Oh this is PERFECT!!!!!  -SEA |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
AniKay83, thanks for reading. I'm okay, just awoke to memories today. Thank you ~ SEA, gosh, thank you! (smiling) I'm glad you liked it! Rainydays |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Sad and bleak. It made me think of someone waking up to a still-dark morning all by themselves. Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
such a beautiful morning to be tainted by sadness. but those are realities. hope you feel better. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Elizabeth, yes, that's precisely what led to my writing this morning. Thank you so much for reading. (smiling) Ron, yes, one must wonder, sometimes, how so much beauty can co~exist with such pain and melancholy...it is a balance, to be sure. I am feeling better, thank you. (your worm poem helped) Rainydays |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This IS poetry! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Thank you Irish Rose. I'm sorry for the delay, didn't realize anyone else had read this. Thanks for your enthusiastic reply! (and I love your name, by the way!) Rainydays |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
This was so gorgeous, I could picture it outside my window and was going to single out a few lines I loved but I can't because I loved them all!!!! ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Such a clear picture, I could smell the tea, and almost hear his footsteps as well. Wonderful poetry. Sandra |
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