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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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sometimes i get a little cranky and i know that it drives you a little crazy and i want to give you more but i see you heading for the door and i know you and you know it's true and i am not gonna run after you cause i know that is what you think i will do and i have my head on straight this time you were just a few seconds too late always you want it to be just like in the movies real life sometimes can make you a little bit whoozie though it seems i am laughing inside i am crying don't want to watch our love dieing please tell me that you haven't stopped trying won't you please listen to me i am not your enemy come down now from your high horse show me a little bit of remorse and i will pat you on the back empathy is what you lack i need to help you get your feet back on track and it's frustrating the way that you're living take me now don't you see all that you mean to me? i raised the white flag i give up you win in your arms all is forgiven Julie :) |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'sometimes i get a little cranky and i know that it drives you a little crazy' ----------------- 'don't you see all that you mean to me? i raised the white flag i give up you win in your arms all is forgiven' Wow, what a strong poem! I can definitely relate this this! I love it! sp  Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
don't you see all that you mean to me? i raised the white flag i give up you win Your love is strong and you're willing to concede to keep it. A heartfelt poem indeed. Really liked the flow. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thanx so much for the replies...sorry I could say a lot more to both of you but i have got to run..... Julie :) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
enjoyed reading it....yeah hold your head straith....well done  Charisma |
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